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Waits with baited breath if folks pick up what's going on in panel 10

I am very excited for chapter 12. 1 more page to go then the hiatus starts!

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"Do not see every enemy as an enemy. See them instead as an ally, whether they know it or not." Kreia

Latiaslovar

Oh, I see what you mean in the Patreon header, on the back -- err, posterior edge -- of her jawbone. Yeah, they kinda just look like shading, don't they?

The Lonely Sand Person

Okay I know "living" might be a bit of a stretch but you know what I mean.

The Lonely Sand Person

Congratulations, Neri! You're living for two now!

The Lonely Sand Person

Without trying to spoil anything for others, does this mean no starshine and long walks with wood chips? If so, aww, that's one of my favorite parts.

Drakkenfyre

I don't know much about how the rules work for them, but this seems crazy.

Strawberry Puptart

Not gonna lie, until the kickstarter pointed it out i never once noticed the horns on Neri's jaws.

Razor_Wolf

I'm honestly surprised CS doesn't have a TV tropes page at this point, haha

ALRadeck

It's like one of those muzzle dog leads, kinda

ALRadeck

I like to think the comic is kinda a more polished version of the novel at this point, haha. But yeah it's been nice to expand on some bits and minimalize others (like for example, the banter after this bit's cut off and next page is the last of 11. Mostly because 11 is *extremely* long at this point and I didn't feel it'd fit.)

ALRadeck

I can think of a few tropes of what comes of this, but I don’t have a clue, specifically.

Afunnythinghappedtome

New skill acquired?

Zorua705

So does every time Raziel tries to get away from Neri her head gets jerked around by the muzzle? What an awkward attachment point for an energy leech!

D

Teleport to next year*

WorldsW0rst

I have no lore insights to share like everyone else, but I love the onomatopoeia of the Angel Link Palm Slap resulting in the sound of a microwave ding

Kibbles

And so, the ability to converse begins

Kyle Suhling

I'm enjoying seeing Raz's internal dialogue here as well as the entire expanded treatment of his turning point. For the people who haven't read the novel you didn't see his thoughts there as it's written from Neri's perspective only, and he just slaps the side of her nose and it takes a bit to find out what it meant. So this is a nice combination of condensing yet expanding the same part of the story.

Drakkenfyre

When the tether snaps, angels go poof really quickly. Gauzier himself had to stop and since both of their priests are back at the house they have similar range limits. Assuming he bought the whole fake fight post-window smash (and it basically looks like he did) and didn't question Neri coming back to snatch Raz out of his fall (he might've assumed she wanted to take care of him personally rather than let the fall kill him) then "he's going to tether to the demon who tried to kill him" might not be the first thought he has as they reach critical distance. Then again he's a conniving bastard so he might think that's exactly what he's going to do and then go back, sulk, and plan more.

Drakkenfyre

Somehow, I don't think this is going to help convince anyone that he's hostile to Neri even after they put all that work into making a big fight scene.

Gren Drake

might have

ALRadeck

https://i.imgflip.com/5ajbfn.png?a481392

ALRadeck

Without spoiling too much, there's no text on monday's page so unfortunately it'll at least be a month before we see any consequences of that yet, haha.

ALRadeck

[insert neon blue power LED suddenly turning on at 2am and waking up the whole town]

Wolf

Oh shiiittt the text color changed. So how can I teleport to next monday?

WorldsW0rst

I HAD A FEELING THIS WOULD HAPPEN. LINK YOURSELF RAZIEL!!!

Lowdicrous

... *incoherent noises of I'm not sure what* so I think the fading stopped???

Akitiki


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