tRavel'd Day 3 Rough Cut Reaction
Added 2025-06-03 15:16:06 +0000 UTCHey Peaches! It's day 3 and we're still in Sevilla. After a nice breakfast in an alley we head out of town to some Roman ruins that were in Game of Thrones. And then we head back into the city to see the largest wooden sculpture in the world. Finally Jay does some shopping on Daigon Alley.
Please let us know your thoughts about this rough cut. What you want more of, or less? What needs more context? Do you want more graphics? If so where? Your input is a massive help as we craft this into it's final form!
Comments
I admit: seeing "Naboo" was awesome, but perhaps some convo on what it really is, when it was built etc. I think my favourite part was the bench watching the ducks with the convo between Real Jay and Imaginary Adam. Also....yeah, when talking of sexy Gargoyles, we really need the insert of Demona and Eliza when she was turned into one----oh yeah. and of course Goliath.
Shauna
2025-06-23 23:20:39 +0000 UTCWhen Michael is asking a question off-screen, I recommend using a different color text so it stands out more. If that's not feasible, maybe a drop-shadow?
Bladefire
2025-06-14 22:33:58 +0000 UTCThese keep getting better! Hurray for putting in the actual backpack photos \o/ This episode is way denser on content and so far had imo the best blend of looking at travel things and your bits around it. Really like you putting in the alternate view in the colosseum with that wide shot of Jay, the flashback to the bus running, agree you can do that a lot more. Honestly, I'm starting to think you shouldn't go for 1 day an episode. Because if you want them to have similar length you'll either drag out days with less content, or cut a lot on days with more. I wouldn't mind Day 3 to be cut in 2, have Day 1 and parts of Day 2 together tho, focus more on your expectations and arrival. So making each episode more about the content than time. Also think it might not hurt to use snippets from here as teasers in episode 1, as things to come. I could imagine you in the studio summarising some of the things you saw, with the snippet either on top or in the usual react spot, just to get everyone more into what to expect. Maybe I missed it, did you talk about the actual building year of that wood sculpture? Or put it somewhere? I really like that you got a calm thoughtful moment up there. Slow down, see where you are. Within all the fun and bits, which is still the main focus. But giving room to some more serious moments when they happened. Think you got just the right mix in this one.
Drakoni
2025-06-09 02:17:38 +0000 UTC
