BDSM Fantasy Roleplay - Bad Boy Gets Whipped (request)

Hello my pets, I hope you are well.
Today's file is a BDSM roleplay request for boys and it's a little heavier than what I usually do. I will say this is not something I'm used to doing nor something I'd consider myself good at doing so I'd like to hear feedback from those of you who are more into this than I am.
If you want to know more details, here's the request that I followed:

 Master Jay,  I lean a little more toward heavier bdsm play, and would like to know if you done a session geared toward that type of interest, or consider doing one...  Something along the lines of a boy that master knows pushes the boundaries of obedience...a boy that must be taught what happens when he displeases master.   In then session, the boy would find himself helplessly bound and vulnerable to masters whims. And while fear builds in anticipation of masters wrath, so does the boys arousal.  As master seduces his boy deeper & deeper into trance, the boy eventually begs and sobs for masters mercy, and while master consuls his boy, he informs him there is no reprieve..., that in fact he will experience the consequences of displeasing master.   Master would then describe the crack of the whip, that through hypnotic suggestion, will correlate to a snap of master fingers. How the lash will lay across his back, how when landed how the sting, will grow with intensity, how the red bite marks of the whip will grow into stinging welts, and how with each lash the boys cock will get harder and harder.  And, when the last rally of blows the boy cums..., knowing that he did so without permission. And, that in itself will need to be addressed by master.  

I'm usually more comfortable doing gentle domming and stuff more closely related to hypno than this so I'd like to hear your feedback if you enjoyed it and if you'd like more files like this going forward.

Take care, Master loves you~