Swing & Miss version 0.53.3 (Hotfix)
Added 2019-09-01 15:54:58 +0000 UTCPassword: GetThatThingAwayFromMe
A simple update because one of the choices didn't work as it is supposed to. All content was available in the last version, but this one makes it a little harder to get one of the endings if you don't want to see a certain type of content.
Comments
On Fiona's phone you might want to have Davis put a picture he likes has the home page. Also, you just did this once. You had Kayleigh call Fiona Fi. I thought you would have continued the nickname and even made it Fifi to signal that she was becoming a pet. You could have used it when talking to the MC about Davis's pet and the MC thinking they named the pet after Fiona. Overall I liked this story a lot. Though the way the story is written some of the corruption decisions probably should have been with Fiona. But the story is almost finished so it is just advice for the next effort.
OhioOkie
2019-09-05 13:53:03 +0000 UTC
