January 2020 Toon Up - Hinata's Getaway
Added 2021-01-18 03:48:19 +0000 UTCAll characters depicted are consenting adults participating in consensual roleplay.
Toon Up delivery! And this one was so big I had to break it into 3 pages! Make sure you get em all!
Redid a whole comic from 2018 with some animated goodies at the end to boot! Went a bit overboard on this one, I ended up keeping elements of some original panels, reworking others, doing a whole middle-section from scratch, to go for a kind of hybrid between my old look and my current abilities. I think it comes across pretty nicely!
Enjoy!
Original comic from two years ago, for those curious to directly compare!
What do you think? Am I any better? :P
Comments
Yeah there are some really charming elements of the original I admittedly still really like, particularly the bra popping off. I decided to mix it up so we could have more tiddy this time, but honestly I think you're right. It's a really fun keystone of the piece that would really only improve the tone. Perhaps an alt is in order!
Dawho555
2021-01-18 05:20:37 +0000 UTCIt should go without saying that the art and writing are both much better overall in the new version, but I have to admit, thereβs a couple minor details I thought the original comic did better. The thick cleave gag in the original looks a lot tighter and more stifling than the much thinner cloth used in the remake, and as unrealistic as it might be, I canβt help but love the exaggerated imagery of Clone!Hinata tightening the hogtie so forcefully that Hinataβs bra pops off. Even so, excellent work!
WarioNumberOne
2021-01-18 05:06:29 +0000 UTC
