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Which is funnier?

Just the first page alone or with both pages?

PG 1

Panel 1: Stolas walks into Octavia's bedroom, its door already open. He casually knocks on the doorframe.

STOLAS: Knock, knock, dear. Would you be interested in going with daddy to...

P2: From Stolas point of view, we see the same last panel as the previous comic, with Octavia and Loona wearing each other's clothes, with Octavia grabbing Loona's shoulders. They all look at each other uncomfortably.

P3: Stolas is tearing up, shivering, on the verge of crying.

STOLAS: Oh! Oh, my dear Octavia... has finally been stricken with the hormones.

OCTAVIA (off-panel): Dad, no, stop.

P4: Stolas gestures to Loona, approaching her.

STOLAS: And this must be your gay female lover.

OCTAVIA: What the fuck, Dad!


PG 2

P1: Loona, grins, pulls in Octavia tight for a side-hug, wrapping her arm over Octavia's shoulder.

LOONA: Ohh... oh, yeah! We're lovers alright. Been hooking up every day.

OCTAVIA: What? Dad, that's not--

P2: Loona leans towards Stolas, with an intense sneer.

LOONA: And she calls me Mommy too.

P3: Stolas, mortified, shrinks.

STOLAS: *gasp* ...she's just like her father!

OCTAVIA (off-panel): I hate you both!

Comments

I voted for just page 1, and the percentage for both pages dropped to 69%. I feel this is a sign.

Cp10fluffy

I really have to watch this show now to get all the jokes, but I say both

Sgurd Olson


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