Brother complex page 19
Added 2016-01-20 15:19:30 +0000 UTCplease let me know your opinion on the webcomic so far, and what direction you think I shouldtake with it ;)
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One thing I would like to see is a bit of backstory into the medical treatment Rose received later on if it gets brought up. The second item I'd like to see addressed is why Rose is being so affectionate towards Jack...
Daichi Lu Azure
2016-01-21 04:40:38 +0000 UTCI'm really liking the setup for the comic so far. Can't wait to see more shenanigans like this one with the 3 characters so far. So it looks like they'll all go to back to school sometime in the future, so here's an idea I came up with to fill out the story a bit. In a lot of your standalone drawings I've seen you draw Rose being much stronger than Jack. So story wise, it's only been, like, a day since he got back right? Maybe he has a lot of luggage that got mailed back to him after his flight. That could make an interesting scene where Rose can't resist helping Jack when his luggage is really heavy, and she starts carrying them like everything is a box of feathers. It might also be a good time to show what Jack was doing while studying abroad. Maybe he brought back mementos or something.
Autoreloader
2016-01-21 04:03:10 +0000 UTCAwesomes. I'd like to see Megan and Rose and Jack in school, Megan and Rose shopping or Megan and Rose in the gym, while Rose tries to find ways to spend more time with her brother (join same club/class/hobby?)
Chasbanner
2016-01-20 17:52:01 +0000 UTC
