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Deal With The Devil - Day Seven (836 lbs)


Deal With The Devil - Day Seven (836 lbs)

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An interesting proposition. Alex would have done anything to save his own skin, but the Devil doesn’t work that way

Lokitu

....I just read this story again - I wonder what Alex would have said if the devil gave him the option of staying 836lb for the rest of his life, vs. death?

Cowpoke

I am starting to understand how the 'suffering' part of Weight Gain or EXTREME WEIGHT GAIN is more realistic and sometimes more HORRIFIC. Gainers fantasize what it is all about. But I am sure there is another side to the story that may actually be HORRIFIC. Not everyone is Super Strong Sumo Wrestler that battles to GLORY ! I think a dose of reality of what life 600+ lbs is like is due. PLUS the AUTHOR THAT DOES SO CUTS A NEW GENRE and more.......... publicity? Is that the correct word? Someone help me here: it is a vocabulary word that I am to tired to remember.

Poppa Jim

THAT'S A GREAT STORY POOR ALEX I WISH I CAN HUG HIM ,

Harry Medina

Thanks so much for the kind words! I'm glad you're digging the stories so far :)

Lokitu

I am new to your Patreon & have to say, I love it! I have to admit, I have only read 2 of your stories (Max & Roy, & Deal w/ the Devil) but this one is my favorite - The best part, IMO, is Alex in the back of the truck tearing into 3 bags of pig feed just to satiate himself......so good! I was not ready for him to pop just yet, I wanted to be on this journey with him a bit longer. Great story, and can't wait for more from you! keep up the good work.

Cowpoke

“Not even human anymore” this was incredible!

Detroitdesignguy

Torn between feeling ridiculously jealous of this poor jerk and his beautiful comeuppance, and also now side-eyeing the number of unread messages I've blown off on Grommr in fear. Magnificent.

Sideburns

Thank you Carl!

Lokitu

A dark story, with a dark ending...it couldn't really have gone any other way. Beautifully written, Lokitu. Bravo!

Carl Quaif

Thank you!

Lokitu

Absolutely Brilliant work!

hugefatfat

Thank you for the feedback Jeremy. I do appreciate it and take everyone’s comments on board. I knew the darker tone wasn’t going to be for everyone, but after Max & Roy I wanted to tell almost the opposite kind of story, to present variety in the stories on here. The next story will be different in tone again.

Lokitu

Thank you! I’m glad you liked the darker tone.

Lokitu

No artwork? It should be there. It loads fine for me.

Lokitu

Carl Jokl

I was actually rooting for a happy ending for Alex; some form of redemption. But unfortunately, some people, the choice to seek selfless redemption or to ask for forgiveness, making honest efforts to change one's behavior, doesn't happen or happens to late for the consequences of their actions to produce a happy ending. Bravo on creating this engaging story. Though I'm not a fan of the gaining and suffering genre, the writing and illustrations kept me hoping Alex would come out of this having learned to be a nicer and more gracious person. Thank you for pouring hours of time and energy into these stories.

ChubBrush

So happy it ended this way. Amazing story, amazing drawings . The off screen boom it is a very cool idea, so it is not as gross as it could be. I love the dark and bad ending of this story

WereBear80

Apparently I predicted the plot twist. Still, wonderful story. Loved it.

Lazy_Fatboy

I'm so happy to enjoyed it!

Lokitu

Loved this story and all the art that went with it.

Oracle250

Thank you!

Lokitu

Great ending! And he didn't lose weight!

Southernfatboy

Deal fulfilled. Quite the ending. Awesome story.

Willie J


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