Something is blocking the view...part 1
Added 2021-06-30 06:49:28 +0000 UTCElia just want some relaxing day on the beach....
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Part 2 ??
2022-08-22 13:54:13 +0000 UTCGreat short story and love the outfit for Elia but I think it would benefit from more images of these scenes from different angles. For example, the last image is Elia holding the boulder in one hand from a distance. It would be really good if you move the camera in more in maybe two subsequent images and re-render to show a closer look at Elia and then maybe a close-up of her face as she effortless holds the massive rock. This way, you are not having to worry about changing in poses or such. It is just the same image from a different angle or closer to Elia. The same goes for earlier images. Some close-ups of Elia looking at the rock from both behind and in front to see her face. A image of her lifting the rock with her in view. I am also a fan of supergirls who have other powers than just strength. Seeing her flying to the island like supergirl would be great. Like she is flying over the ocean and lands on the island for a nice, relaxing sunbath. Maybe the short story ends as she starts touching herself as the sight of her lifting that massive boulder turns her on.
2021-12-15 08:00:54 +0000 UTCMan, when I saw her doing this, I just had a vision of her walking on the sidewalk that she usually walks, but then there's a new corporate building in her way...then you take it from there..just a thought🤔🤔🤔🤔
Bernard Phillips
2021-07-01 01:19:09 +0000 UTC
