New Story - An Exclusive Performance with Magistrix Synn
Added 2024-09-06 00:57:23 +0000 UTCAnd it's here. Hot off the presses. So hot I finished typing it up this morning and editing it five minutes ago.
This is the new short story I wrote for Literotica's Pandemonium event. Two university students are invited by a wealthy friend to see a very exclusive performance.
It ended up running longer than I originally intended. I thought it would be a 5K short story and it ended up being just short of 10K words. In the past I made a mistake of trying to cut a similar story to this (one of the Koontz ones) down to a more 'correct' size and ended up butchering the intro. I decided to let this one be the length it wanted.
As usual the succubus had far too much fun playing with her food. I think they do it deliberately to tease me.
This one is about a week late, so apologies for that. I wanted it to be August's release and couldn't quite finish it in time. I was then hoping for the start of the week, but a couple of slow days typing it up together with it being longer than I originally thought pushed it back to now.
It's here now. While I have edited it, I don't normally like editing so close to finishing a story, so there might be a few more typos and errors than usual. My plan is to wait a week and then give it a more thorough going over before putting it up on Literotica.
I hope you enjoy it. Let me know your thoughts below.
Comments
Always glad to get a new story! Thanks!
vetlet
2024-09-08 17:56:39 +0000 UTCI think her hair is stated as black when she first comes onto the stage after taking her hood off. I'll check when I give it a through edit next week to make sure I didn't accidentally leave that off. The anal scene was a late addition. The way the performance flowed from blowjob, to inserting in her pussy, it made sense for anal to provide the 'finisher'. That's what increased the word count a bit, but I felt it better reflected it being a performance that it wasn't one of those stories where the succubus finishes the prey on the first ejaculation.
Many-Eyed Hydra
2024-09-07 11:36:13 +0000 UTCSPOILERS: Cool story, it covers new territory which is always good to see from a writer. It didn't seem overlong at all. The remote/mesmeric angle is a fun idea and could be used with other sexy magic users (Annette maybe?). I also like the way anal played a big role, which is something I miss a bit in a lot of the newer stories. The one thing I would ask is if you’re doing more edits might you include Synn’s hair colour? (Might have just missed it)
CrimsonCrown
2024-09-06 23:06:59 +0000 UTC
