New story - "The Succubus in Mr Herbert's Summer House"
Added 2020-09-25 13:30:18 +0000 UTCIt's a good idea. Everything's dropped into place. It'll be easy to rattle it off in time for Literotica's Summer Contest.
Whoa boy, was I wrong on that.
At least it's finished now.
It took a lot longer to write than I was expecting. It's also twice as long as I was expecting.
It's a bit of a slow burner. I was aiming to follow certain horror tropes. I'll post my full thoughts on it in a day or so. This one will also be entered into Literotica's Halloween Contest, which starts in a few days time.
In the meantime, you get to read it early. I hope you enjoy "The Succubus in Mr Herbert's Summer House." Let me know what you think in the comments below.
Many thanks for your support.
- manyeyedhydra
Comments
She is definitely a liar. And extremely greedy. I think her rampage through the seaside town might be a lot of fun to write... :)
Many-Eyed Hydra
2020-09-27 21:20:38 +0000 UTCIs this the first time we’ve seen a succubus actually flat out lie and break their word because I could have sworn she said only a little you won’t even notice but he Fuckin noticed
ASkillings
2020-09-27 21:03:25 +0000 UTCThat story was amazing! Again, thanks for taking my name :D Also the ending really peaked my interest in seeing a warlock take care of a succubus (I assume the German is a warlock or some kind of demon hunter). So far, all your stories have been completely one sided when it comes to the conflict between humans/warlocks and succubi. Would be interesting to see a warlock being able to either send a succubus back to hell against her will and outright kill her.
Wakozi
2020-09-26 03:41:31 +0000 UTCIt was very good. This was a good read.
Jimmyodi841
2020-09-25 23:13:19 +0000 UTCIt's always the most fun when they play with their food. 😈
Harold V. Campbell
2020-09-25 15:05:50 +0000 UTC
