Ideas File: Bubbleicious

(or should that be Bubblicious.  Hmm....)

As part of my continued efforts to try and offer something more to patrons (you will get semi-exclusive stories at some point!) I thought I'd open up the ideas file.

One of the best bits of advice I can to an aspiring writer (or any other creator) is to keep a notebook  (or .doc file on your computer) and jot down any sweet story ideas as you get them.  For me it is usually erotic scenes, monster girl ideas and sometimes whole story plots.  This may seem obvious advice, but I've been guilty of neglecting it in the past.  This sweet story idea come out of the blue, I'll tell myself to jot it down, then something comes up, the brain gets distracted and the story idea vanishes into the aether, never to be seen again.  Nowadays I keep a word doc specifically for story (and game) ideas and jot them down as they come to me.

This particular idea was something that came up while I was working on stories for Lit's Halloween competition.  Originally it was for a single short story and the notes read something like this:

Bubblicious (Bubbleicious?).  Bubble-themed massage parlour.  Looks higher quality than a regular massage parlour.  Kitsch, over-the-top design.  Bubble blowers in the reception.  Almost unreal, fantasy-esque in appearance.

Protagonist is a local police officer.  He's investigating the parlour.  It's in a UK city that takes a hands-off approach to massage parlours (so long as they aren't involved in trafficking), so he's investigating reports of weird behaviour from people who've frequented it rather than busting it for being a brothel.

Succubi in brothel specialise in soapland-style activities, but ramped up.  Inspiration likely from reading the wiki about the bubble-play succubus in Lust Grimm.  The succubus in this story secretes aphrodisiac soapsuds that also have a mind control effect with prolonged exposure.  Her room plays up to this ability - a full wet room with air-mattress padded walls so she and her partner can have a good roll (and bounce!) around.

There would be a fight with the protagonist, but the succubus's special move is a bubble-lubricated handjob.  A hand around the protag's cock is enough to overwhelm him in bliss and the bubbly sex that follows is enough to twist him into her little pet.

I'll redact the last part of the idea outline as I had a twist in mind.  I won't spoil it here because I might get around to writing this at some point.

I did have a speculative stab at seeing if I could get finished in time for Halloween.  About a couple of pages in another idea presented itself.  The concept of the massage parlour - Bubbleicious - was interesting.  I've written about various bubble-themed and soapland-style succubi before.  Some have shown up (a little too briefly) in H-space stories (eg Bubble-Tail Succubus).  Some are sitting in my ideas file and waiting for an appropriate story.

I thought this might be a good home for them.  Rather than a single story, there might be enough material to make a shared collection (likely with the hapless police officer's investigation as the connecting story).  I suspect I could probably create a few succubi that fit this theme very well.

And another book idea goes onto the pile.  I really wish I could write these as fast as I can think of them!

Not sure when I'll get around to this (next month I'm going to be fully on producing the next CYOA).

I'll try and make the ideas file a semi-regular series for patrons.  I'm not too fussed about ideas being stolen.  Ideas are generally not as important as the execution of them, and if what I've written here gives you some inspiration, go for it!  In fact, when I get around to posting some of the more complex game ideas I have, I hope someone steals them, as I'm fully aware I lack the organisational ability to make them myself.

Updates on what I'm currently working on to come Thursday as normal (unless eaten by a succubus).

-manyeyedhydra