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English? Bad Hombre?

Are you satisfied with the translated texts in English? Or do you feel we need to write them with more formality?

Suggestions are Welcomed. 

Comments

The problem was the time, everything included the animation I did it in a month. That's why I did not have time to review the translation. Now I've had more time and I'm sure it's better, but I'll know it until they've tried it. XD

MMV-DeepBride

I voted yes as I feel it's formal enough, but there is quite a bit of room for improvement in term of grammar and syntax.

shlong69er

I am voting that I'm satisfied, but that's not to say it can't use some work still. It's rough in spots and once in a while it doesn't quite convey the correct meaning. However, I can understand what was intended (sometimes after a slight pause to think about it), and I am not bothered by minor mistakes.

Naraku-no-Hana


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