Curse of Desires pt 1 - First Access!
Added 2025-03-03 01:44:41 +0000 UTCHello my lustful $10 patrons!
This is that commission I've been telling you about! It's a big long affair so it's a bit of a slower burn, but that just means it gets an opportunity to really dwell on the sexy circumstances it finds itself in. Let's see the synopsis:
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After a night of raucous partying, Brandon wakes up to discover he's been cursed to acquire the traits of the women he lusts after, and he's already got the boobs to prove it! Now he's got to find the girl responsible and get her to turn him back before he loses himself completely in his lusts.
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So, gosh, this ended up being a long one. At 16,000 words, this first part is already about double what I normally try to aim for and it's only part 1 of 3, haha. While this is probably going to be the longest section, it goes to show why its been taking so long.
It's always fun doing commissions! In this one I did a ton of back and forth with the commissioner. They had a really strong idea of what they wanted to see happen and they did a lot of the brunt work in the outlining phase and keeping things organized, which was a huge help. Thank you, honorable commissioner, for all your help!
Up next will probably be part 2, but I might end up doing something a little different to keep things mixed up! We'll see how the scheduling goes!
Gosh, I don't do a whole lot of longer form stuff these days - certainly not as much as I should be, this is a bit of a kick in the pants in that regard - but it was good to stretch a bit on this and really sort of dig into the . Let me know what you think!
A great big thank you on this one to my lovely wife, for her time and care, to the aforementioned commissioner for asking me to bring this idea to life, and the help doing so, to my editor Selkie for helping me really dig in with the hotness (go check her out on TGS and smash!), and of course, to all of you! Thank you so much for reading!
Enjoy!
Comments
This has been really good so far. I like the little twist where he's taking on aspects of women's lives that he finds sexy like the lesbian best friend. I'm curious what else might change, car, house, job, obligations, other relationships ect? As always appreciate the sapphic undertones so far.
Marazhna
2025-03-06 01:06:34 +0000 UTC