Wishes Gone Wrong - Sapphic Sorority Sluts Gone Wild pt1 - First Access!
Added 2021-12-05 22:33:15 +0000 UTCHello everybody!
Today I've got a special treat! It's the first half of what turned out to be a very long Wishes Gone Wrong short. I had intended it to be maybe 5k words, but I planned poorly and now it's looking it'll be out in two jumbo installments of ~6k each!
Let's look at the plot!
When nebbish everyman Harper wishes that he could go unremarked among a hyper-sexualized sorority house, he probably should have specified not as a member! Now he's finding himself caught up in a whirlwind of slutty sorority antics as they take him in as one of their own! Will he escape? Or will he find greek life agrees with him a little too much?
It's a bit of a slower burn, being mostly set up, but don't let that dissuade you - it's going to get very hot and heavy in the second half! I hope to have that up in two weeks, so stay tuned!
As always I'm super eager to hear what you think! So if you like it (or not!) let me know, either here in the comments or down in the discord!
And of course, a final shout out to Coth, for his discerning eye, to the love of my life, for being there, and to all of you! I wouldn't be doing any of this without you!
Enjoy!
Comments
Ah, thank you for catching those typos, my proofreading on this one wasn't quite as thorough as I'd like >< Haha, you noticed! Poor Harper, I think, is one of those people who be too awkward to correct someone even if he had realized. And yes, it comes through more clearly in the second half, but the whole support and care thing is a big aspect of this, thematically, and one of the whole reasons I really wanted to write this one. Even if, ah, it takes a bit longer to tell something like that. I'm really glad you're enjoying it! The next part should be up hopefully by the time you read this!
Razmagurk
2021-12-19 18:15:24 +0000 UTCHi Raz! Long time lurker, first time commenter. This story is shaping up great. I noticed a couple typoes: Page 4: "A flash of pink. A flash of flesh. Temptaion." → "Temptation." Page 6: "Yeah, hey, I know your nervous." → "you're". "But its going to be great" → "it's". "unappoligetically" → "unapologetically" Page 8: "A Girl walked by" → "A girl walked by", I think, unless this is a stealth crossover with Jukebox's Girls(TM) universe. ;-) I love how Harper has completely skipped over at least two instances of being called a girl/'her' so far. > I was back to feeling extraordinarily self-conscious. My whole body felt strange and foreign. Hah, nevermind, it's starting to seep in. :D Some nice porno self-exploration in the bathroom, and then let's see if that comfort and mutual support made it into the wish... > And I think you’re stronger than you give yourself credit for. Awesome. > To be continued. I can't wait!
Acroth
2021-12-07 22:25:43 +0000 UTC
