The Device: Media Bias - First Access!

Hello to all my spectacular $10 patrons!

It's here!

I'm glad I took the extra time to go back and polish this one because, while it's still far from perfect, the difference in quality between then and now is night and day. 

As a creator, you learn that the perfect is the enemy of the good.  You learn to be happy with 'good enough' because if you spend months polishing every sentence it'll never get done.  The lesson here is that you should never use that as an excuse to settle. 

But enough of that, let's get to the meat shall we?

In today's offering - the winner of our second story poll -  Kaitlin gets ahold of an amped-up version of the swapping device which can affect  objects and make retroactive changes through recordings. Large scale, big-concept swaps follow as she tries to redefine society to her own  tastes and whims.  

This one took a few surprising turns as I was writing it. After so many chapters of GFwTD it was interesting to be giving the device to a character who isn't afraid to use it for petty purposes or to go whole-hog with it. I had hoped to get more fanservice in, but sadly it kept throwing off the pacing, but if you ever want to see the deleted "dog/girl" swap or "fratboy/statue" swap, pm me in the discord and I'll pass it your way.

A special thank on this one to Coth, for being my second pair of eyes and assistant editor, to the love of my life for her constant support, and to you for being so patient and supportive. Thank you.

It is my hope to have the next story up for the july 4th weekend. I'll be sure to let you guys know if things are ahead or behind of schedule. If you ever want to see how the next chapter is coming, please come check out the discord -- I try to give progress reports there every night. 

I'll have the poll results (and the new round) up later this week

I hope everybody is doing well as staying healthy! Be safe!

Enjoy.

- Raz

(PS. In keeping with this year-long marathon of writing challenges I seem to be doing, I'm currently setting up for a 'three question' challenge where I write a short bit of fiction to answer three questions (such as "How were her tits so big?" or "Where did they hide the bodies?"). If you'd like to check that out or contribute question-prompts of your own, please come check out the discord.