Chapter 11 now available for First Access Tier!
Added 2018-07-31 02:42:57 +0000 UTCHello Everybody!
Drama, Betrayal, Heartbreak, Boobs! At long last, we thunder through the conclusion of the strip club arc! This one could have gone in a lot of directions, and while our heroes didn't escape from the club unscathed, I hope I was able to give you all a satisfying arc-finale!
There's a dark cloud looming over the future of our protagonists, and I know some of you are worried, but I want to reassure you all that while the next arc is when our heroes begin their darkest hour, just remember that it's always darkest before the dawn!
This one was certainly a drama-heavy, but there was a lot of tension that needed to get blown off. Don't worry though, to show that things haven't gotten too serious around here, we've got some silly sexy hijinx as a bit of a pallet cleanser coming up in the next few chapters before we start to get in too heavy with the drama once more.
Please let me know what you think in the comments! Or visit the discord and say hi! I really do love to hear from you guys! I couldn't do any of this without your support!
Special thanks to you guys for all of your kind words and comments and suggestions! An extra big shout out to Katherine for making me cognizant of some major structural issues that were looming!
As always, an extra special dedication to the love of my life, for being my muse.
And of course, a personal thanks to you, specifically, for being so awesome. Thank you, and enjoy.
Comments
When Evan has his dick, he describes it as 'above average' but his idea of average comes mostly from porn, so it's actually quite sizeable. Everyone refers to it as huge once it's on Ellen, and a part of that is also her smaller frame making it seem larger. The dick that Evan ends up with at the end of this chapter, the one formerly belonging to Candy and Marcus, is bigger even than that, and is the biggest dick Elizabeth - an experienced consumer - had seen. Ellen's boobs before she got the machine were slightly above average, but she had body-image issues so she tended to think poorly of them. Ellen's boobs after chapter one are quite large, approaching or about the size of her head. They are always the biggest tits in the room, unless otherwise noted. Evan's boobs after chapter one are 'almost as big as' Ellen's, but that's a bit of an illusion caused by his reduced height. Try to imagine them as about a size smaller. Evan's boobs are perkier and bouncier though, and Evan makes up for having smaller boobs by having a bigger ass. Elizabeth's starting boobs are quite small. She doesn't appreciate it, but they're quite cute and fashionable. They're small enough that she doesn't really need a bra and she can't really do anything with them. Evan's boobs after chapter nine are a bit bigger than the ones he got in chapter one, but not so much that his clothes wouldn't fit. They're rounder and a bit more 'bimboish', if that makes sense. Does that help?
Razmagurk
2018-08-21 18:47:30 +0000 UTCThis is a bit of a random question but I got curious thinking about it the other day. What are the actual sizes of the three main characters boobs and dicks? They all react in a similar way to their size when they get them but I'm left curious as to how they all actually line up
Cephala
2018-08-17 17:40:17 +0000 UTCWell they made it out alive and still together, though not without a few new proverbial scars (that they don't even comprehend!). Super interested to see how this story resolves. Keep up the good work!
Katherine
2018-08-03 23:48:04 +0000 UTCI really enjoyed this whole arc. Highlights for me in this chapter were both mental swaps. You do a really good job handling the cognitive dissonance as Evan absorbs the new memories and traits. I vaguely remember you saying you enjoy writing how people behave more than how they physically look. It shows here. I’m not sure what the original structure of the story was before it was restructured but I think you accomplished what you were aiming for. The catharsis at the end felt very similar to the ending of the body language chapter. I’m kind of curious what the original outline was prior to the rewrite, darker I’m assuming. I will be intentionally vague here in case someone sees this before reading the chapter but I am surprised that the final conversion with Evan and Elizabeth went the way it did. It makes me question her intentions going forward assuming we see her again. After getting this far into the story I almost think of Evan as a guinea pig as he is the target of so many swaps that it is almost a character trait at this point. Because of that I probably care more about how the swaps effect their relationship more then the direct effect to Evan. The swaps to Ellen hit harder because of that. She has been the target of far fewer swaps than Evan so each change to her feels more meaningful. Historically each swap on her seems to have far more long reaching repercussions as well. I mean almost every swap Ellen performs on Evan at the mall is due to her swapping her sexuality in chapter 1. And so I look where she ends up swap wise at the end of this chapter physically and mentally and I can’t help wonder what consequences/swaps will be in store for Evan going forward. Because you know it will probably be him that takes the brunt of the new status quo. Looking forward to the party you have been foreshadowing for awhile now.
JR
2018-08-01 04:03:07 +0000 UTCI'll get on it right away!
Razmagurk
2018-07-31 13:38:37 +0000 UTCI definitely need an updated list of all the swaps, I keep forgetting what has and hasn't changed from the last chapter
Cephala
2018-07-31 06:19:54 +0000 UTC
