"Spicing Things Up" finished comic!
Added 2016-07-29 14:18:29 +0000 UTCThere you go! All finished up! With the dialogue and all. And a horribly bland title! The best kind!
Here's an imgur album with the finished comic.
I'll start working on the cover soon. Once it's done sometime in the next two weeks I'll release the comic with it to the non patron public.
That's also when I'll be posting the 5$ and 10$ rewards. I thought long and hard about when to make the paid post. I feel like it should be the actual comic, but on the other hand I don't want to make you guys wait too long for the rewards after you've paid.
I've decided to make it now, with the meat of the comic finished. Let me know if you think the other way is better.
And let me know what you think about the comic! And the whole patreon so far. Any input appreciated :*
Comments
Oops, I just meant the text under the title on the first panel as "exposition text." I love the dialogue!
Bill Himmelsbach
2016-07-31 16:45:20 +0000 UTCRolling out the premise and art took a little while but it all came together nicely. Most of the cast came together as well. hey-oh~
Tyler Leto
2016-07-31 08:42:20 +0000 UTCLoved every bit of it! The dialogue ("exposition text") was spot-on and your artwork is well done as it always is. :) I'm happy this exists.
WiredRM
2016-07-30 19:33:43 +0000 UTCThis comic is absolutely wonderful! Nice story and the dialogue at the beginning definitely reminds me of some of my own experiences. If you want some milquetoast critique: I like the story better without the exposition text under the title. I'm reminded of some of your other great comics, like <a href="http://eros-art.tumblr.com/post/82970525967/surprise-by-incase" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://eros-art.tumblr.com/post/82970525967/surprise-by-incase</a> . You do a great job of establishing the story without exposition given the comic's length, and I think Spicing Things Up stands on its own too! So far so great! The Patreon rewards are really just icing on the cake, and I'm just happy to be supporting such awesome work. Really looking forward to the next comic! Edit: just made it clear I'm only talking about the text under the title with a better example. The dialogue is great!
Bill Himmelsbach
2016-07-30 19:18:36 +0000 UTCNice comic! I literally laughed out loud at Henry's response to Susan in the last panel, heh.
infernalperson
2016-07-30 11:17:34 +0000 UTCMaybe you should have done a poll for a title, that one is really bad. But there is no disappointment in the comic, I love it.
FooldiverDX
2016-07-29 18:31:46 +0000 UTCYou're one of the few artists who regularly draw men that aren't just faceless dicks or the ugly-guy trope. Never stop.
Tubal
2016-07-29 15:33:35 +0000 UTCI'm so glad I sponsored this is what I think.
Tubal
2016-07-29 15:31:34 +0000 UTC
