Chapter 5 - 10.5
Added 2024-04-15 19:13:00 +0000 UTCWell, this is probably the most "boring" update of TLLT to date, and for that I have to apologize lol. After such a heavy scene between Fletch and Kinley I do think a transition back into their road trip was needed. We see just enough to know that Kinley talked to Dick and Priscilla, and Fletch went back to Judas for some much needed comfort (and sleep lol).
A more ambitious Mccull probably would have taken this transition and ran it right into the next scene-- to make it a longer more interesting update, but quite frankly when people go back and read TLLT all at once, it's not going to feel out of place to have this as an update on its own. shrugs
I can hear Rowdy groaning already LOL (He didn't edit this one, because I told him there was no need. But I already know he will think it's lame).
Comments
There are no boring updates of TLLT.
rippingoffmyface
2024-04-22 21:11:26 +0000 UTCI think it's worth mentioning that Dick and Priscilla, despite their own shortcomings, can be forgiving. And they'll be the first to move on from all this mess (Dick has been pushing that narrative this whole time lol). They're a vital part in moving the group along to actually having fun. <3 Glad you enjoyed this scene, even if it's a bit short!
Mccull
2024-04-16 14:07:02 +0000 UTCThis is a lovely way to end that difficult conversation. A hug is such a small thing, but it conveys so much. Apologies and explanations, and snuggles all around. I am super glad to see that Dick and Prissy really are good friends. We’ve seen this throughout, mind, but this is a lovely way to really seal it. And Judas snuggling Fletch is super sweet too. Boy needs it.
Sagando Mirasta
2024-04-16 05:59:17 +0000 UTC
