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3. The Magician's Burden

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Wizard tower, dragon riding, magic experimentation, looming divine deadlines, system event, moral dilemmas, starting off strong in this book, im super hyped to keep reading!

Adhoah Cinnidhlaoch-McCoinnich

Whoo! Dragon riding!!!

AutumnLeaves

Thanks for the chapter! Just an edit suggestion: "During Sam and I’s trip, no one we met was anywhere near us." -> "During my trip with Sam,..."

AutumnLeaves

Yay, MAGE TOWER! Can't wait to see how the area is built out soon!

PWeygandt

That’s a good point! I figured he’d already made the point as it was though, maybe if it comes up again later or the “looming threat” of the God Games comes closer it’ll come up easier in conversation! Mark might encourage him to use the magic to level up for example, so it would come up as a natural counter point then!

OverXelous

tftc! He did even mention the c-rank limit set by Istrael. Closing rifts of unknown size or too many to help people could get out of control at some point.

Kritzel Kreider


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