70. Arrival at the Moore Estate
Added 2025-10-22 15:39:00 +0000 UTCComments
The rewrite Is great! Thanks for the new version of the chapter!
AutumnLeaves
2026-02-04 16:22:30 +0000 UTCJust want to chime in and say I'm loving the story so far. I was certainly in the group that was sceptical after the earlier god interaction and losing progress. But I feel like it's been handled well so far so I'm looking forward to seeing how you resolve the latest interaction.
Micheal Hunt
2025-12-16 00:50:43 +0000 UTCNo set end date for the break, though I’m plotting and working on Book 4 again. I’m feeling rested and motivated after the rest! Thank you for saying so :) I’m glad you’re enjoying the story!
OverXelous
2025-12-01 00:42:34 +0000 UTCI'm new around here. When is the break over, if anyone knows ?? Also if you read this Author, this is a great story.
2016 2500HP Long Cab Chevy Silverado
2025-12-01 00:40:56 +0000 UTCThis is the first comment of this type I’ve seen so far to the ending, but it’s sort of to be expected! I’m sure there will be a lot of very skeptical people on Royal Road when this eventually gets there
OverXelous
2025-10-26 02:08:39 +0000 UTCIf he gets nerfed again and loses something important, I'm not sure I have the patience to wait for the recovery...
invisiblemonki
2025-10-26 02:04:37 +0000 UTCSo that’s the end of book 3, loved it cant wait for book 4. Do you know how long of a break you are planning to take (take as long as you want)?
Frank Bob
2025-10-24 22:12:05 +0000 UTCI took a couple weeks off from reading g so I could binge and boy do i wish I had waited longer! I don't want to wait, I want Book 4 now! (That said, take your time. I love this story and can't wait for the next book)
PWeygandt
2025-10-24 16:56:46 +0000 UTCUnless she let's him I don't think so. Back when they were introduced he wanted a few from her world to play with. And he also criticized her about how the way she does things leads to her having less "Kings"
Jeremiah Lee
2025-10-22 21:58:18 +0000 UTCIt was a nice touch.
Jeremiah Lee
2025-10-22 21:55:05 +0000 UTCThe RRA is the Rifts Rights Alliance. I think they've been mentioned in passing in two or three previous chapters. They are the people with the flyers who tried to get Scout to come talk to them. They were also preaching in Jake's chapter. Not everyone will catch the reference, which is totally okay! They've barely been touched on (but will be around a lot more next book:))
OverXelous
2025-10-22 18:16:31 +0000 UTCIs the RRA a new association or something mentioned in the earlier chapters I may have missed?
castiel Phoenix
2025-10-22 18:14:35 +0000 UTCLove the exposure of the “unreliable narrator” here, seeing the new guys perspective on his “still growing friendly team” and his “cute blue snake” 😆
Albadia
2025-10-22 15:55:05 +0000 UTCIn other news....Val being referred to as a dragon finally, the concept of there being two "Johns" 😂 , a rare rift in the front yard....Oooh Alex better survive Istrael's test to be her chosen (wait does this mean that her brother will also choose a chosen?) 👀 can't wait for B4 to start
Ser
2025-10-22 15:52:37 +0000 UTCHahaha from the outside looking in, we are certainly fancy 🤣
OverXelous
2025-10-22 15:40:31 +0000 UTC"The Moore Estate"....oh we're fancy now
Ser
2025-10-22 15:39:38 +0000 UTC
