Industrious: Engineering Marvels - Chapter 4
Added 2023-10-14 10:45:36 +0000 UTCAlright! That's the introduction to this story done!
Next comes the meat of the matter, though there will be some bridging material for a chapter or two as Ray gets set up in his new world and armed to the teeth to help the Steve and Bucky hunt down Hydra.
That will be for later, though. Next up on the docket is a chapter of Winning Peace, though I may sneak a quest update out over the weekend first.
Once again, I can't thank you guys, gals, and non-binary pals enough for all the help and support you're giving me. Rock on, have a safe weekend, and enjoy the new chapter!
Comments
The nerve gas thing is a bit of a ways off considering WWII hasn't finished yet, but the Demon Core might get name-dropped. There are a wide array of historical topics that will come up for Ray to rant about, though.
Slayer Anderson
2023-10-22 08:16:16 +0000 UTCI wonder if he will mention some of the stupid stuff that has gone down though the years. Idiot scientists messing around with the https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Demon_core , British scientists messing around long term with nerve gas (https://www.theguardian.com/uk/1999/sep/03/freedomofinformation.politics), etc...
John
2023-10-22 05:41:33 +0000 UTCReally interested in this one and hope to read more!
Hansolite
2023-10-19 02:19:02 +0000 UTCI think you’re right. It’ll take me a bit to make the changes, but I’ll do a limited rework.
Slayer Anderson
2023-10-14 19:25:51 +0000 UTCThe Air Force didn’t exist at this point in time as an independent branch. It was still a part of the Army, as the Army Air Forces, so inter-branch rivalry would be anachronistic.
Rukkileib
2023-10-14 19:00:20 +0000 UTCHe honestly could have asked for a billion dollars every year and they’d still come out ahead pretty easily, but there’s no reason to gouge like that when he plans on having other steams of income as well.
Slayer Anderson
2023-10-14 18:07:52 +0000 UTCRay’s rationale will be explained in the next chapter, but it’s part of his resolution to be more active and ‘hands-on’ about things.
Slayer Anderson
2023-10-14 18:06:03 +0000 UTCFuck this storyline is epic! Great stuff
Sage Berthelsen
2023-10-14 16:31:40 +0000 UTCAS it slowly startingto happen in the OG story I would prefer if MC help the plot in the back, together with Carter and Start Having Inspired Inventor and going to the front lines is strange
Konan2020
2023-10-14 14:55:12 +0000 UTCAlso forgot to mention foremost expert on medicine in the world now or ever. Just that alone would earn him a spot on the payroll (once verified). Also poor sods don’t know how long this guy will live, or how hard inflation hits. They should just be glad he didn’t say after tax. Granted they actually come off having gained way more than $100k worth having someone like that on the payroll for perpetuity.
Zerak
2023-10-14 11:48:28 +0000 UTCThanks, fixed.
Slayer Anderson
2023-10-14 11:28:54 +0000 UTCI think you mean chapter 4
Zerak
2023-10-14 11:22:59 +0000 UTCMan I can't wait to see the ripples from this or how Erik and his relationship will go as well as how a Magneto who is around a Stark can develop, just think of it the man of Magnetism with one of the men of the future as well as the MC
Rockinalice
2023-10-14 11:07:51 +0000 UTCVery nice. Hopefully MC can control the ugliness that came from winning the war like Paperclip and the US's bloodthirst in Asia.
gaouw ganteng
2023-10-14 11:05:12 +0000 UTC
