Industrious - Chapter 36
Added 2023-05-08 09:51:03 +0000 UTCOkay, the people have spoken! Industrious will be focused again this month, but Winning Peace is catching up so it gets the next chapter (possibly two, even). After that it's a pair of Industrious chapters again and we'll see how everything else shakes out.
Oh, and as the poll indicated I have opened up a new $5.00 tier for those who want to throw more money at me. I will try my absolute hardest to up my word count in the coming month to make it worthy of your increased support!
Rock on and stay awesome!
Comments
Super excited for more interludes with reactions from across the village as time keeps passing. Always fun to see people react to the wunderkid
Flygar
2023-05-09 15:27:11 +0000 UTCI'll be doing a more detailed explanation of this shortly, but it boils down to being easier to tie into the chakra network if you're physically closer to the gate/organ you want to effect.
Slayer Anderson
2023-05-09 00:55:03 +0000 UTCKotaro teaching them valuable life lesson continues :)
Tom
2023-05-08 21:49:57 +0000 UTCMaybe it’s for stable, long term stuff? All the examples given feel like exceptions rather than the rule.
Wolf Man
2023-05-08 20:28:39 +0000 UTCSomeone had an especially egregious case of butterfingers when reading the doc this time. Changes purged, though. Should be fine now.
Slayer Anderson
2023-05-08 19:55:20 +0000 UTCI am sort of surprised that he has to apply the seal directly to his head. We have at least three examples of seals being written elsewhere and then applied to another surface. Two of which are applied to skin. The evil sealing seal Kakashi uses on Sasuke is written along the entire room in addition to characters written on his skin and the curse seal applied by Orochimaru, while fantastically complex, is placed with a bite. In addition to that we also have the 5 element seal placed by orochimaru on Naruto with a grab. It feels like he should have been able to apply to seal to a scroll and then transfer it to himself.
Ryune
2023-05-08 18:41:23 +0000 UTCWhat's up with all the stuff wrong with this? You've got text bolded, turned weird colors, invisible, etc?
Robert Krol
2023-05-08 17:12:28 +0000 UTC
