Industrious Chapter 13!
Added 2022-11-26 13:16:43 +0000 UTCAlright, this was much smoother! Finished it up in a few days and it's hot off the presses! I hope everyone enjoys and you continue to have a safe and beneficial holiday season.
Thank you all for your support once again and I hope to have at least one more update out before the month ends.
Comments
It's funny how quickly he can shift from appearing capable to someone that needs to be looked after in the girl's eyes, at least for a moment. It helps explain why he could believably flunk out of the academy. I could imagine him needing to keep sticking a point in combat trees on occasion just to keep them from babying him. Satsuki could easily leave him in the dust once her eyes kick in.
Esp
2022-11-30 21:16:14 +0000 UTCYakumo: "My child mentor can't be this dreamy!" Shisui: "I feel a disturbance in the force." Obito: "Fucking nerds...I mean geniuses." Naruko and Satsuki: "Cool, I guess?" Itachi: "I see."
Bob Saget
2022-11-27 23:16:12 +0000 UTCYaaaass boiii flex your abs and biceps in front of the female, this shall get you the hose. Only a matter of time until others hear about it and demand equal treatment.
Doggi
2022-11-27 22:32:10 +0000 UTCthis story is why I subbed couldn't wait to read more :D
Tom
2022-11-27 20:41:52 +0000 UTCI think it's more supposed to show the synergy effect mentioned in previous chapters, and how these power ups aren't really 2+2, but 2^n. That, and said synergy is always exponentially expanding with new powers.
Flygar
2022-11-27 17:04:44 +0000 UTCThere's nothing beyond personal preference stopping her from going to town with learning ninjutsu at the moment. If she overcomes her condition she would be perfectly fine to learn/master a taijutsu form or a sword form or whatever.
Slayer Anderson
2022-11-27 06:51:17 +0000 UTCDeconstructing the shunshin, then deciding to go for yin-yang manipulation and chakra-conductive metals gives very 'Omae Wa Mou Shindeiru' vibes.
Bob Saget
2022-11-27 04:43:09 +0000 UTCOnce Yakumo learns Prana Bindu to a sufficient degree to overcome her illness, does that mean she will be at a point where she can learn all the ninja arts? Ie not just genjutsu or taijutsu/weirding way.
Vanathor
2022-11-27 03:42:19 +0000 UTCShould be very careful from here on. Once they realize that he’s only a step or two removed from recreating Hiraishin, they’re going to chain him to a desk or lock him up forever out of caution.
Acrimonius
2022-11-26 23:26:56 +0000 UTCI see it. Trying closing the doc and re-opening it if you're on your phone. I know I had a phone that wouldn't update the page if I only refreshed it.
Esp
2022-11-26 19:42:08 +0000 UTC... I'm not seeing chapter 13. Only chapters 11 and 12.
Anonymous Daniel
2022-11-26 19:16:50 +0000 UTC
