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Industrious Chapter 13!

Alright, this was much smoother!  Finished it up in a few days and it's hot off the presses!  I hope everyone enjoys and you continue to have a safe and beneficial holiday season.

Thank you all for your support once again and I hope to have at least one more update out before the month ends.

Industrious Chapter 13!

Comments

It's funny how quickly he can shift from appearing capable to someone that needs to be looked after in the girl's eyes, at least for a moment. It helps explain why he could believably flunk out of the academy. I could imagine him needing to keep sticking a point in combat trees on occasion just to keep them from babying him. Satsuki could easily leave him in the dust once her eyes kick in.

Esp

Yakumo: "My child mentor can't be this dreamy!" Shisui: "I feel a disturbance in the force." Obito: "Fucking nerds...I mean geniuses." Naruko and Satsuki: "Cool, I guess?" Itachi: "I see."

Bob Saget

Yaaaass boiii flex your abs and biceps in front of the female, this shall get you the hose. Only a matter of time until others hear about it and demand equal treatment.

Doggi

this story is why I subbed couldn't wait to read more :D

Tom

I think it's more supposed to show the synergy effect mentioned in previous chapters, and how these power ups aren't really 2+2, but 2^n. That, and said synergy is always exponentially expanding with new powers.

Flygar

There's nothing beyond personal preference stopping her from going to town with learning ninjutsu at the moment. If she overcomes her condition she would be perfectly fine to learn/master a taijutsu form or a sword form or whatever.

Slayer Anderson

Deconstructing the shunshin, then deciding to go for yin-yang manipulation and chakra-conductive metals gives very 'Omae Wa Mou Shindeiru' vibes.

Bob Saget

Once Yakumo learns Prana Bindu to a sufficient degree to overcome her illness, does that mean she will be at a point where she can learn all the ninja arts? Ie not just genjutsu or taijutsu/weirding way.

Vanathor

Should be very careful from here on. Once they realize that he’s only a step or two removed from recreating Hiraishin, they’re going to chain him to a desk or lock him up forever out of caution.

Acrimonius

I see it. Trying closing the doc and re-opening it if you're on your phone. I know I had a phone that wouldn't update the page if I only refreshed it.

Esp

... I'm not seeing chapter 13. Only chapters 11 and 12.

Anonymous Daniel


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