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Thanks for waiting an extra day everyone! I think I'm finally back on schedule now after a very hectic week.

With my stated goal of wanting to fit in as much of the cast as possible in this chapter, that means I'm going to be bouncing around a lot, especially since we're still in the beginning here. But we will be coming back to Abbey.

I wanted Elianna's swimsuit to be as anime as possible. I thought about maybe having her in just the stock anime swim uniform but it was too plain for someone looking to show off for her new boyfriend. The Nami bikini from One Piece won out in the end. Meanwhile Kayden has to wear a label because at this point I'm concerned that he might read as a flat chested ( i.e. too young looking) girl otherwise. And Derek is just dressed for practicality.

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Comments

Elianna looks fantastic here.

Jariah Synn

Ain't it always the way! XD

Reinbach

I guess he does look like a fed from the neck up lol. XD

Reinbach

Can't be too careful! XD

Reinbach

Not with Mary on the beach! :O

Reinbach

He has the scars to prove it! XD

Reinbach

XD

Reinbach

Thank you!!

Reinbach

Thanks!

Reinbach

XD

Reinbach

I like it! :D

Reinbach

How about now?

Reinbach

Quite possibly! XD

Reinbach

Probably! XD

Reinbach

Doesn’t Derek fear the sea racoons?

StonesThrown

Also, could Elianna's parents have really promised to her with a straight face that the party would not have orgy qualities?

Minivet

Now I'm wondering, are Switch or Halver invited to this party?

Minivet

Great action:) Good pick for a yacht design, fancy, but not outrageously expensive, really gives a good idea of how wealthy Eli’s family is. And I think Derek would need a bigger vest :)

NKL

Ummm, where's the post gone? I cant see it.

Stavros

God I hope so

Count Cockula

Elianna's inevitable sex scene is going to be utterly depraved, isn't it?

CumFntn

Changed it it, thank you! :)

Reinbach

At least Elianna has a couple flotation devices too

el_zilcho

The New Terrible Trio, featuring the sexiest prude ever, her loyal femboy sidekick, and the man who puts Murphy’s Law to the test!

el_zilcho

@Abbey, same bro, same

Sorrow

Me wishing I was Abbey. Also, props to the Nami swimsuit. I recognized it immediately.

TexasTies

At least its the biggest one

Slaughterbug

Derek knows life jakets are important when his very presence may sink the whole ship. Lol.

Slaughterbug

God this page was the page that kept on giving, obviously the first four panels had a lot going for them, then I noticed Kayden and was very appreciative, then saw that life jacket and laughed out loud. Great page

llCDll

Twink ahoy!

Ranger Bumblefuck

Only one life jacket for Derek? Living dangerously.

Woody

Proofreader here again: Could be a stylistic choice, but the word is "weird", not "wierd". =)

jubs

Derek dressed like a man who has faced near-death one too many times.

TheFirstSword

Gawd DAYUM, Kayden! It's a good thing he's on that boat. If he was on shore, looking like that, he wouldn't last a second.

Squid Hills

I love that Derek even in post-Elianna protection aint taken no chances surrounded by all that water just waiting to drown someone.

Jon

Derek "The Man".

The Funny Hatter

Damn it aliana, you made me love you for wearing Nami’s bikini, but then you went on to do everything we all get annoyed with about you XD

Lord Washington


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