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Added 2023-09-08 04:22:33 +0000 UTCI worried that Mandi's dialogue in that bottom left panel felt a little unnatural or overtly expository. I feel like it needed to be there for the sake of pacing though. We're three weeks into this scene now. I think it was time for readers to find out what Mandi's relationship to Vincent was.
So! Vincent is banging his sister in-law. I hope this scene is keeping your interest, and that you're looking forward to seeing how Switch reacts to all this when the dust settles.
Comments
Great! :)
Reinbach
2023-09-19 02:22:57 +0000 UTCLooking forward to seeing more Mandi! Hot, Large-breasted Red Head? Yes, Please!!!
Chris Davis
2023-09-17 02:30:56 +0000 UTCUse the same quirk a time or two in the future, say to punctuate a dramatic moment with a splash of humor, and you’ll retroactively establish Mandi as acting with complete integrity for her character.
Mark Hunter
2023-09-12 15:27:16 +0000 UTCFuck yes! I can't wait to see it develops!
Graci
2023-09-12 08:40:29 +0000 UTCInteresting! The Japanese style is familiar to me now that you mention it but I didn't know about the Korean version. Thanks for sharing!
Reinbach
2023-09-12 03:19:46 +0000 UTCContext: referring to English speaking fans who read the translations, and speaking mainly about adult content In Korean manhwa fan circles, they use NTR to just mean *any* kind of cheating. It’s a very simple (or simplistic) take: if a girl the MC is involved with (or even interested in) has sex with someone else, it’s Netorare. If the MC has sex with a girl who’s supposedly in a relationship with someone else, it’s Netori. Yes, I know these are Japanese terms being used to describe Korean content. Don’t ask me why 🤷♂️ In Japanese Hentai manga, the Netorare tag comes with a whole cluster of associated tropes. It’s usually a woman being targeted maliciously by an outside man, with intent to destroy a relationship. Common associated tropes are mind control, blackmail, coercion, corruption through pleasure, moral degradation, and mindbreak (sometimes through anguish, but most commonly through overwhelming sexual pleasure). A common scenario is a woman who is in a loving, romantic relationship, though she may be feeling a little unsatisfied, and the outsider then coerces her into sex - and it’s SO GOOD, she becomes addicted, can’t live without him etc. The destruction of the relationship is usually through the eventual willing betrayal of the woman - she will explicitly admit the outsider is the superior man, and denigrate her partner’s manliness. This can either be just to the outsider, or very commonly is videoed and sent to her partner (or even done in his presence) to twist the knife. Notably, unlike the Korean version, the relationship that gets destroyed doesn’t have to be an actual sexual one. NTR also covers “turning his sister/mother/daughter/platonic childhood friend into a slut and stealing her away” The dialogue in your bottom left panel is absolutely typical of the genre, and the exact scenario (“sexually dominant younger brother turning his elder brother’s wife into his toy, until she can’t live without his dick”) is quite common.
KnightRider007
2023-09-12 02:57:00 +0000 UTCGreat! :)
Reinbach
2023-09-12 02:43:25 +0000 UTCXD
Reinbach
2023-09-12 02:43:18 +0000 UTCGlad to have the interest! :)
Reinbach
2023-09-12 02:43:13 +0000 UTCHey thanks! I suppose she was established as someone who thinks out loud, which helps.
Reinbach
2023-09-12 02:42:58 +0000 UTCThank you!
Reinbach
2023-09-12 02:42:29 +0000 UTCA solid question! :)
Reinbach
2023-09-12 02:42:24 +0000 UTCUnderstood! XD
Reinbach
2023-09-12 02:42:03 +0000 UTCThanks! That's what I was going for.
Reinbach
2023-09-12 02:41:55 +0000 UTCGood to know! :)
Reinbach
2023-09-12 02:41:42 +0000 UTCWell without spoiling too much I can say that I imagine Switch changes up her tactics depending on her host. What worked with Casey might backfire with Vincent, for example.
Reinbach
2023-09-12 02:41:18 +0000 UTCXD
Reinbach
2023-09-12 02:40:15 +0000 UTCHope you like how this plays out! :)
Reinbach
2023-09-12 02:40:10 +0000 UTCSomewhere in Castlewood, WA. XD
Reinbach
2023-09-12 02:39:56 +0000 UTCGlad to have the interest! :)
Reinbach
2023-09-12 02:39:34 +0000 UTCHey thanks! I always struggle with implying movement like this so it's good to know when I get it right.
Reinbach
2023-09-12 02:39:21 +0000 UTCHope you guys like what I have planned for her reaction here when the time comes! :)
Reinbach
2023-09-12 02:38:46 +0000 UTCThat they are! :D
Reinbach
2023-09-12 02:36:48 +0000 UTCXD
Reinbach
2023-09-12 02:36:39 +0000 UTCNoted! :)
Reinbach
2023-09-12 02:36:35 +0000 UTCHey thanks! I'll do my best to keep the ass quality high. XD
Reinbach
2023-09-12 02:36:19 +0000 UTCQuite so! :D
Reinbach
2023-09-12 02:35:43 +0000 UTCGreat! :)
Reinbach
2023-09-12 02:35:36 +0000 UTC;D
Reinbach
2023-09-12 02:35:12 +0000 UTCNow I'm curious what the difference is! XD
Reinbach
2023-09-12 02:35:04 +0000 UTCLooking forward to how Switch handles him.
NKL
2023-09-11 19:26:33 +0000 UTCChains went up when she tried to take advantage of Bria. That's pretty much it, as far as we've seen. She actively encouraged her getting her step father to cheat on her mother. We also know from the game she can kill her host's boners, at least temporarily. That'd be the real punishment, just make sure he can't get it up anymore.
Lonestar
2023-09-09 04:09:33 +0000 UTCOh yeah we've got a properly fucked up MC again! Switch should be eating her own hair over this.
Malmedee
2023-09-09 01:38:17 +0000 UTCThis is really hot. I love the way she knows it's wrong, keeps saying it aloud but never stops and is clearly getting off on it. Vincent comes off as a jerk and I'm interested in seeing what happens to him as a result but I love the fantasy of corrupting these women.
Casey
2023-09-09 00:53:37 +0000 UTCI don’t think that second to last panel was overly expositional. Considering how verbal and explicit she was when talking aloud about the ‘sin’ of eating an energy bar one hour early, it just seems like a quirk of her personality. I’ve known real people who do the same, almost like they don’t realize when they’re doing it out loud in front of another person.
Mark Hunter
2023-09-08 22:41:04 +0000 UTCActual Gold
Lioxdz
2023-09-08 22:27:25 +0000 UTCThe real question is did Vincent and his brother have a bet on how long it would take him to take Mandi? Some folks love sharing their significant other’s, so this could be a non issue. It’s castlewood, all the kinks come out here. The brother could come in, high five Vincent and spit roast her. This dialogue could turn out to be some role playing they do. Definitely looking forward to seeing how it turns out
MAR
2023-09-08 18:00:06 +0000 UTCI'm torn. On one hand this is almost UNBEARABLY hot, but on the other I want this kid smacked down soooooooo badly.
HungryOuroboros
2023-09-08 16:41:20 +0000 UTCFun mid sex twist for readers that reminds me of Bria's debut. Adds a whole extra layer of forbidden.
Olympian Comics
2023-09-08 15:57:16 +0000 UTCI at least like Mandi's look (woo naked MILFs!) but man, Vincent's a jerk. Then again I'm a big softie who prefers healthier (if still kinky) relationships. (See: Issac & Parker, for example).
A Guy
2023-09-08 13:18:19 +0000 UTCI suppose you're right that it feels different with Vincent, because we have a double standard when women are more predatory sexually than with men. But with the complete context in mind for Casey, we also understood that Switch had to let things play out a bit in order to address the underlying issue with Case. We don't know enough about Vincent's inner life yet.
GregD
2023-09-08 09:55:19 +0000 UTCI don't know why it's too surprising considering what she let and encouraged Casey to do way back. How different is this to "trapping" her stepfather and wearing him down until he finally gave in. Genders are reversed, but it's basically the same thing. Switch only seemed to be hands-on in the extreme extreme.
Lonestar
2023-09-08 09:52:02 +0000 UTCI honestly dont get why Switch has allowed things to go this far without any progress on Vincent's part. But as a side note: no, I don't feel like the dialogue is unnecessarily expository. Because it's clear this woman thinks outloud all the time, even when no one else is there. Could also be the reason it was so easy to convince her to do this. Part of her really wanted to be 'bad' in a real way, not a fake way.
GregD
2023-09-08 09:25:34 +0000 UTCSwitch is going to have to make Vincent's death look like an accident, I see.
Squid Hills
2023-09-08 07:14:11 +0000 UTCAre we in front of Switch first failure? Will they have a redemption arc? Amazing!
Graci
2023-09-08 07:08:31 +0000 UTCSome people are beyond redmption. What's Mandy's home address BTW?
Alex
2023-09-08 06:27:43 +0000 UTCYou have no idea how invested I am in your work dude
Epocseer
2023-09-08 04:56:42 +0000 UTCThe bottom left panel is a little expository but not in an unnatural way. It's always hard to get that kind of information across and her reiterating their relationship for emphasis makes a certain amount of sense. Even if we're not applying the standard 'porn logic' or judging by those standards lol You've also done a remarkable job with the action shots of her ass. Particularly in the last panel. It's a real treat to see so much movement and the variety it brings.
Snizzlefit
2023-09-08 04:51:37 +0000 UTCI think switch has put Casey in chains for less than this. I can't wait to see how she punishes this guy.
Slaughterbug
2023-09-08 04:51:01 +0000 UTCOh my god. Scan-fucking-dal. I love it. The crawlers are wreaking havoc.
Merjia
2023-09-08 04:41:26 +0000 UTCScandless
alex baker
2023-09-08 04:36:43 +0000 UTCI think "brother-in-law" would have worked better. This feels to Space Ballsy "Nephews, Brothers, Mothers, Aunts, House-mate" etc
Lord of Nightmares
2023-09-08 04:34:27 +0000 UTCWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO so much ass-age! Tons of poses showing it off, like you've leveled up on butts all over again. Even the titty-showing pose (which I was waiting for!) shows off the butt! And there's Vincent gripping it all over the place to bunch it up repeatedly and show off each cheek to its fullest. I think the final panel is my favorite- something about the perfect rounded shape a fully-grabbed ass makes is spectacular, and there's even an indent that shows the spanking, and it's deep enough to show this is all juicy, meaty FLESH- a jiggly mommy bum! Looks like nobody guessed Vincent's relationship with her- a couple guys said "stepmother" and that made more sense than mine (guidance counselor) though I figured it was too much like Isaac's story in that case.
ScuzzBucket
2023-09-08 04:30:43 +0000 UTCOh switch is gonna be mad…
Lord Washington
2023-09-08 04:27:48 +0000 UTCHusbands little brother?! Scandalous.... more of this and that fat ass. I love Mandi!
Jariah Synn
2023-09-08 04:27:00 +0000 UTCSwitch is gonna be piiiiiissed
Vince
2023-09-08 04:26:22 +0000 UTCMoving it beyond just regular cheating, firmly into NTR territory… (the Japanese kind, not the Korean kind)
KnightRider007
2023-09-08 04:24:24 +0000 UTC
