This Romantic World Page 8
Added 2018-03-30 02:24:53 +0000 UTCAs always I'm experimenting with new ways to draw semen convincingly. Here I'm trying to get away from drawing it in "clumps" once it settles on the skin. I'd be happy to hear feedback.
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His girlfriend. That sounds so weird lol. He’s really dating his wife’s teenage daughter. What could possibly go wrong lol?
Angelo
2018-04-03 01:51:08 +0000 UTCIt would be an interesting thing to address when Royce finally comes around again, though considering who his girlfriend is I can't imagine him going long without sex lol, but you never know.
Reinbach
2018-04-03 00:47:53 +0000 UTCYou are truly too kind, sir.
Jonoffen
2018-03-31 10:34:41 +0000 UTCSo Warren's load was only this big because he hasn't had sex in awhile, right? So if Royce ever went without sex for a long period of time I guess he'd be able to fill up a bathtub. From what we've seen with Royce so far, frequent sex hasn't made his loads any smaller. He came three time during that Casey/Bria threesome and each one could probably fill a bucket.
Angelo
2018-03-31 02:30:39 +0000 UTCExactly! So you just admitted that it was indeed, not as advertised.
MysteryStreet
2018-03-31 02:16:55 +0000 UTCOh wow, that is a definite improvement. I didn't mind it before, but the "dark outlines" really make the clumps "pop".
ScuzzBucket
2018-03-30 20:34:25 +0000 UTCYeah, their pairing is interesting. Part of me wants to see more about it, but the other part recognizes that their bit of the story in "Switch" is kind of OVER and you probably don't wanna go back to Bria's entire plot thread all over again. TRW seems more like wacky comedy, so Bria's dark character arc might be out of theme now :).
ScuzzBucket
2018-03-30 20:32:21 +0000 UTCRight on!
Reinbach
2018-03-30 20:20:25 +0000 UTCThanks! Made some tweaks to it and now I think it strikes a balance. :)
Reinbach
2018-03-30 20:20:17 +0000 UTCThanks! I've been looking forward to getting more into Warren's character for a while. :)
Reinbach
2018-03-30 20:19:43 +0000 UTCGreat! :)
Reinbach
2018-03-30 20:19:08 +0000 UTCI'm certainly going for odd! I added some clumps to her in panel four. It's a compromise! :D
Reinbach
2018-03-30 20:19:01 +0000 UTCWell, anatomically inaccurate as it may be, I've kind of been going by the rule that bigger dicks make bigger loads. So Liz may have been surprised to see a Royce-sized load come out of Warren when his dick size is "average" for this universe.
Reinbach
2018-03-30 20:17:54 +0000 UTCI imagine Bria thinking his awkwardness was endearing, but he didn't really float her boat sexually.
Reinbach
2018-03-30 20:16:05 +0000 UTCThis scene is winding down. That's one thing that will be different in TRW: shorter sex scenes but more of them.
Reinbach
2018-03-30 20:14:47 +0000 UTCShe's not quite so devious lol, sounds like something Casey would do though.
Reinbach
2018-03-30 20:14:12 +0000 UTCYou couldn't even see her pants in the advertisement! :o
Reinbach
2018-03-30 20:13:47 +0000 UTCLooks great and she looks smokin hot wearing it :D
Bob Fink
2018-03-30 17:36:59 +0000 UTCTHAT WAS A HUGE LOAD. I really loved the 4th panel. ¡TRW just keep getting better! On the semen thing, i think you managed to work it fine. I mean, it has sense that when it touches the skin (or the clothes) the cum remains thick, but when it mixes with the sweat and saliva it can look traslucid.
David
2018-03-30 16:49:45 +0000 UTCSo I absolutely love the dialogue here. You nailed it in my opinion because you set the reason for him not being quite the stud he's been made out to be previously. Well done!
Lux
2018-03-30 12:27:20 +0000 UTCNice, love it
Dean Sturtevant
2018-03-30 11:33:37 +0000 UTCI prefer the thick clumps - more realistic. The movement of her tits is fantastic in the first panel. Her words are... odd.
Jonoffen
2018-03-30 09:59:01 +0000 UTCIsn’t that a pretty normal sized load for this universe? Why is she so surprised?
Angelo
2018-03-30 06:24:37 +0000 UTCOOF- Liz's body in panel 1. Awesome. Love the extra shot on her tits. I actually laughed, because "He had EVEN MORE in him!?!" Given how the women of the Switchverse behave, I'm surprised ANY man has to masturbate. And given his ability to say exactly the incorrect thing, I'm A) surprised he ever managed Bria in the first place, and B) wondering how you managed to translate me into the Switchverse :). The splatter looks pretty good. I'm more into the thick spray on a girl than once it settles, but the "sort of see-through" look works. Word.
ScuzzBucket
2018-03-30 05:49:38 +0000 UTCIs this as far as their scene together will go or are they not done with each other?
Lord Washington
2018-03-30 05:08:52 +0000 UTCnow liz needs to kiss morgan, let her have a taste of warren. bet it was her plan
alex baker
2018-03-30 04:42:37 +0000 UTCit's dripping down her pants
alex baker
2018-03-30 02:49:47 +0000 UTCExcuse me, sir! But there was no jizz on her pants in the advertisement. So this was misleading.
MysteryStreet
2018-03-30 02:39:23 +0000 UTCand i am finally back
alex baker
2018-03-30 02:38:36 +0000 UTCas advertised indeed
alex baker
2018-03-30 02:37:12 +0000 UTCso this is how her shirt gets staied
alex baker
2018-03-30 02:36:56 +0000 UTC
