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Added 2018-01-05 06:06:31 +0000 UTCMan, I'll admit I struggled with the dialog here. I knew the gist of what I wanted Switch to say, but hammering down specifics gave me a hell of a time. I may be just overly paranoid, but now that I'm down to the last few pages I feel like every word counts more than ever.
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Glad you dig her proportions! I wanted to give her a commanding presents as best I could, so having her tower over Casey seemed like a good start.
Reinbach
2018-01-07 14:34:43 +0000 UTCI only have to keep my trap shut for a few more pages. :)
Reinbach
2018-01-07 14:33:48 +0000 UTCJeez Switch is huuuuuuuuuuge. I mean, we've always known since her first physical appearance that she's bigger than a normal human. It's just that the first and fourth panels really drive home just how much bigger than a normal person she is. Still hawt as heck, tho.
Squid Hills
2018-01-06 17:34:14 +0000 UTCSwitch is like a god
Danny
2018-01-06 10:08:45 +0000 UTCMy only question is whether or not she's real or a figment of Casey's imagination :). I'd look into hints in the story and your writing, but then I remember that strip from a couple of years ago where you identify Switch as a male and I realize it could have totally changed :).
ScuzzBucket
2018-01-06 07:18:12 +0000 UTCI only have to keep my mouth shut about Switch for like four more pages, maybe five, and then I'm free to talk about her. :)
Reinbach
2018-01-06 05:38:28 +0000 UTCWell Casey's still a pervert, but at least she's no longer a danger to others lol. XD
Reinbach
2018-01-06 05:37:32 +0000 UTCCan... can Switch be made a real person? That I could have sex with? Please? I get you on the dialogue. It's something that's easier in an essay or a "long-form" comic- one with a set size like Switch must be MUCH trickier to do, because you have to be as brief as you can. Brevity is REALLY, REALLY difficult to pull off, and takes much longer than "word-wall" text, because you have to be very clear on your intent, while also leaving things less ambiguous for readers. But listen to me going on about BREVITY, lol. ME of all people! I get Switch's meaning, here, I think. It's quite clear that she's like a "helper angel" sorta thing. Exposition and backstory all in one, explaining the past, and what she was here to do. And why she must now leave. PS OMG Casey's tear in the last panel! I want to hold her! And not just because her shirt-pillows are enormous!
ScuzzBucket
2018-01-05 06:44:56 +0000 UTCVery well written, Casey has matured and can now interact with others without sex being the primary part of that interaction. Switch did an awesome job bringing Casey around :-)
Bob Fink
2018-01-05 06:30:43 +0000 UTC
