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EDIT: Adjusted the proportions of the girls in the last panel. 

Can't tell you how hard I was kicking myself once I realized I never explicitly showed that Casey had a phone on her, or even a purse for that matter until it was too late. The best I could do was add pockets to that tiny little red skirt of hers at the last minute. Might have been one of those things that readers simply didn't question if I'd kept my trap shut here but as always I try to be transparent about my process making the comic. 

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Sorry I have a real stigma about reposting a page when edits are made. It drives me nuts to scroll down my feed and see the same thing twice. >

Reinbach

Oh, you edited in new proportions? I don't think I had the last one saved. I wanted to check back and forth to see what was altered :).

ScuzzBucket

Timeskips are always murder on a lot of people's minds. The only way to REALLY avert is to ramp up the exposition even more, which people don't generally like :).

ScuzzBucket

Yeah, I can see that. For my drawings, I actually had to draw those "character posed from the front" reference pics to make sure I always had their boobs at the right size. It goes to hell as soon as you angle an image from anywhere but head-on, but it helps :). Though I use heads as a reference- as your girls have boobs BIGGER than their heads, it might not work :).

ScuzzBucket

Actually I just added a little padding because I wanted to convey the thickness of her coat, but apparently I blew it lol. oh well she won't have it on for long. :)

Reinbach

Was bria always packing auch big honkers? Her bewbs stretch her outfit alot in the last frame. I think im getting forgetful on character design maybe :)

Danny

I think the issue is that Casey's arm is too long. It should really cut across the breast.

Jonoffen

Great, now I have the image of Bria pegging Royce in my head, LOL.

ScuzzBucket

Glad to hear that as a reader you discerned that they'd become closer during the time skip. I hoped I'd foreshadowed it well enough with how I left off on them at the end of chapter seven, but I've found the time skip ended up confusing a lot of readers in ways I hadn't anticipated.

Reinbach

Glad you like it! I don't get a lot of ass practice, I like drawing eyes and breasts too much.

Reinbach

Great to hear it! I'm doing my best to make sure the final porn scene is a memorable one. :)

Reinbach

Thanks! I did my best to convey how happy/excited he is to see her that way. :)

Reinbach

Well with Casey already naked, I'm guessing Bria has nothing underneath that coat. Must have been quite thrilling for Bria, on her way over to Royce's place. I like how sweet that expression and pose is Bria is doing in the middle panel. She's so happy seeing Casey naked. The intertwined hand holding also shows how comfortable and intimate they've become over the time skip.

WarSapphire

Dat Casey ass....

I think I've died and gone to heaven, Casey and Bria in a threesome with anyone would be a dream come true ;-) Sounds like things are heating up in a very hot way :D

Bob Fink

I really love brias expression when Casey is about to walk in

peyfo

Use the retcon, Luke.

Christian

Not this time, though I like that idea for the future.

Reinbach

As for the breasts see above, and with Bria's head that's always a challenge for me lol. Her hair is so big that I worry more about making her head look too huge, and end up straying too far the other way.

Reinbach

Well as for Casey's tits you can chalk that up to my attempts to make them look like they're hanging more naturally. I keep hearing that when you draw really busty girls you have to remember that gravity is a thing, but whenever I try to put that into practice it just makes them look too big it seems lol.

Reinbach

I hope Bria brought a strapon or at least a double dildo.

Christian

I was about to say the same thing. Their proportions look really off on this page. Their tits are way bigger than usual and their hips are tiny. Bria's head looks a little small too.

Angelo

Oh my GAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWDDDDDDDDDDDD I'm already dehydrated :). Is it me or do their boobs look Sylvia-huge all of a sudden? Maybe it's the fuller-body shots or something (particularly since Casey has very narrow hips for a busty girl), but they're ENORMOUS. Do love the shot of Casey's cute little butt :).

ScuzzBucket


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