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Added 2017-05-12 05:36:52 +0000 UTCHey guys just a little update here before I start talking about the page. If I've been slow to respond to emails or messages this week I apologize. I'm still quite sick and I can't seem to keep my head up for more than a few hours at a time so it's been difficult to focus on work. Can't remember the last time I caught a cold this severe and long-lasting. But hopefully I'm through the worst of it and I've got a lot of new content here on the way soon. :)
Man, I can't tell you how hard it's been to keep my mouth shut when answering comments these past few weeks. I had more than a few readers remark on Sylvia's sudden, drastic behavior change, and I hope I kept my cards close enough to the vest during my responses that the reveal that she was role-playing is at least something of a surprise. But what do you guys think? Pacing-wise could I have handled things differently? Let me know. :)
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Hey thanks I'm doing much better now. :)
Reinbach
2017-05-17 22:21:10 +0000 UTCTake some vitamin C tablets and those "day and night" flu tablets that target the symptoms get well soon buddy. As for sylvia, her behaviour didn't bother me, submissive or acting or otherwise. Sylvia getting that D is all that matters :)
Danny
2017-05-17 05:13:04 +0000 UTCMiles doesnt want the neighbours to see his friends dongs. People will talk. There! Thats why they need to put on shorts.
Ry
2017-05-15 03:09:44 +0000 UTCLet's see I'm trying to think of how much of this will be answered on the next page. For Sylvia, role-playing isn't enough. To get off on it she needs to put on a performance that would fool an audience, that's where these guys come in. As for the line about the shorts it may not be my best writing I just wanted Miles to say one last bossy thing before breaking character. The rest should be answered in the coming pages but feel free to ask again if it isn't.
Reinbach
2017-05-14 23:30:42 +0000 UTCWhy would they pretend she was submissive to Casey's Father in front of those guys? Who are they? Why did they need to put on this act? Why did Caseys Father agree to it? What purpose could this possibly serve? What could Sylvia gain from this? Has she recently got in touch with Caseys Father or did they never lose contact? We've not seen him till now.. wheres Casey during all of this? ... I shouldnt be thinking about porn this much Reinbach plz ._.
Ry
2017-05-13 13:42:48 +0000 UTCYeah there was no way I would truly flip her entire personality that hard. :)
Reinbach
2017-05-13 11:22:38 +0000 UTCVery much so! XD
Reinbach
2017-05-13 11:22:00 +0000 UTCI guess it isn't. I suppose I just wanted MIles to say one more bossy thing before he broke character.
Reinbach
2017-05-13 11:21:46 +0000 UTCGlad you think it came together well! :)
Reinbach
2017-05-13 11:18:37 +0000 UTCIt's on the way! :)
Reinbach
2017-05-13 11:18:19 +0000 UTCFeel free to ask! But I may just end up telling you that they'll be answered on the next page. :)
Reinbach
2017-05-13 11:17:13 +0000 UTCYou know I can't believe it but the fact that this is Casey's dad is still a Patreon secret as far as I can tell. I was certain it would be obvious after a page or two but I was wrong lol.
Reinbach
2017-05-13 11:16:20 +0000 UTCThanks! I'll do my best to pace myself so i don't get any worse.
Reinbach
2017-05-13 11:15:10 +0000 UTCI had a feeling Sylvia was just pretending to be submissive here. I'm glad I was right.
Squid Hills
2017-05-12 19:30:50 +0000 UTCI hope you get better soon. Also it seems Casey's father might not be as dislikable as I initially thought?
Lord Washington
2017-05-12 18:42:14 +0000 UTCLike why is it important they get shorts before getting in the tub?
Jonoffen
2017-05-12 18:03:51 +0000 UTCVery well played, you really had me wondering what was up with the sudden and very drastic change in Sylvia's personality. So now it all makes perfect sense and is so totally Sylvia :D!
Bob Fink
2017-05-12 16:41:11 +0000 UTCOh ho...or oh, hoe. I would like to know more.
2017-05-12 14:17:53 +0000 UTC*Raises hand* I have several questions.
Ry
2017-05-12 12:57:33 +0000 UTCY'know I was rolling with "Sylvia only acts submissive to certain guys, and Casey's father is one of them" but this makes perfect sense to me too. :P
Kyman201
2017-05-12 06:31:26 +0000 UTCI hope you get well soon. Don't push yourself too hard, take a break if you need to.
Angelo
2017-05-12 06:26:42 +0000 UTCGood to hear! Personally I think things may have gone smoother if I could simply update more frequently. A month and a half is a long time to have a character acting strange without explanation I suppose.
Reinbach
2017-05-12 05:57:32 +0000 UTCIn all honesty I don't think you mishandled Sylvia's 'personality shift'. People are too attached to the idea of her being how she is at all times and if you wanna have any variety that needs to be challenged from time to time. It hardly feels unearned after the seven or so chapters leading up to this point and all the backstory you've given her.
Snizzlefit
2017-05-12 05:54:26 +0000 UTC
