The Box - 017
Added 2022-04-10 07:01:01 +0000 UTC
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I think the one issue i have is her hair Suddenly went from Brown to Green across one page like "Bam!!", I think it would be more eye catching if her hair color shift over a couple of pages, starting from the roots of her hair at the base of the head and then the new green tone travelling down the length of hair, i think it would enhance the corruption more.
SinisterSh0t
2022-05-01 06:02:56 +0000 UTCWhat you mean??
Rammaukin
2022-04-10 15:09:27 +0000 UTCI think the missing parts will turn up...
Obviousagent
2022-04-10 09:24:30 +0000 UTC
