Rewrote Chapter Six of Amelia's Debt
Added 2021-07-24 15:42:41 +0000 UTCEver since I posted the chapter several months ago, I've been unhappy with several things about it. A couple of them were a matter of storytelling, but the major problem was with Albus' actions in the final scene. Yes, it was shocking, but I hadn't done anything to make it reasonable that he would act that way. I was also unhappy with the lack of focus on Harry/Amelia in the chapter, since I had been building up to it for several chapters. I believe I've fixed that issue.
Not sure what I'm going to look at next, maybe my muse will surprise me?
