Prime Hunter Page 06

     Guy feels her whole body stiffen, her pussy clamps down hard around his cock as the orgasm surges through her body. She screams with ecstasy as Guy ejaculates inside her. After a moment Guy pulls out, feeling dazed. His thick, warm come is dripping down her legs as she takes in heavy shuddering breaths of air.

     For a moment she just leans up against the tree, and they stare at each other as they catch their breath. Finally she picks up her suit off the ground and presses her thumb down on part of it like she's pushing a button.

     "You did okay I guess," she says.

     "You guess?" says Guy. "Funny, you seemed quite a bit more enthused a minute ago."

      "Maybe I just don't want you getting a big head about it." She smiles, clearly playing with him now.

      "Well we should probably be getting back inside, hopefully we-" Guy stops, feeling a sudden burst of panic. The door they left the bar through was most certainly locked from the outside, and they hadn't bothered to wedge it open with anything. Which meant they were trapped in a deadly jungle in the middle of the night.

      Guy is about to voice his concern when he feels a rush of wind and a bright glow fills the clearing. He's confused only for a second, as the silhouette of Samus Aran's iconic ship is unmistakable in the night sky.

      "So," she says. "You need a ride?"

The end! Thanks so much to everyone who followed along with this story. I'll most certainly use what I've learned and do another one of these soon. As for this story, it went as well as it could have as far as possible outcomes. For example if Guy had pissed her off too badly she may have just left him naked and alone in the dangerous jungle at the end.

Anyhow as I said I'll definitely be doing another Pick Up Line story. And in the meantime I'm open to suggestions as to what lady should be the star of the next one. So if you have game/anime/comic gal you'd like to read a story about please feel free to let me know in the comments.