The Glory Girls of Hogwarts Chapter Two
Added 2019-01-15 23:33:03 +0000 UTCSTORY TITLE: The Glory Girls of Hogwarts
PART: 02 of ??
AUTHOR: Red Jacobson (redjacobsonfiction@gmail.com)
DISTRIBUTION: Patreon Exclusive
DISCLAIMER: None of the Characters You Recognize belong to me, they all belong to JK Rowling and her publishers.
SUMMARY: During Harry's Fifth Year, all of the girls in their Fourth Year and above got a mysterious message on their bed. What happens next changes everything for Harry!
FEEDBACK: Of course! It Makes Me Write Faster
RELATIONSHIPS: Harry/Multi
RATING: NC-17
WORD COUNT: <5,839>
SPOILERS: None, if you don't know how the Harry Potter story goes by now, why are you reading this story?
WARNINGS: If You've ever read any of my stories, you know what to expect, Oral, anal, Femme-slash, dom/sub, multiple partners, and Femme-cest.
AUTHORS NOTES: A Patreon Exclusive Just something crazy that wouldn't leave me alone until I wrote it, and since I haven't posted anything here for a while I thought it was about time!
A NOTE ON CHARACTERS AGES: As usual, to avoid the Underage Issue, Hogwarts Starts when the characters are 13 years old, so all characters are at least 16 at the start of the story.
Sunday, September 3rd, 1995
Gryffindor Fifth Year Dormitory
After Lunch
Harry grinned when he got back to the tower after eating and saw the galleon and the letter sitting on all the beds. The twins told him that he was the only one in the dorm who could see the other coins since he's in on the whole thing. The others wouldn't see any of the other coins, just their own, and they wouldn't notice the reactions from their roommates. Harry was fairly impressed at the subtle way the two of them used compulsion charms and was looking forward to seeing what would happen.
The letter was fairly straightforward, saying that they knew how stressful their OWL year was going to be, and that tension relief was available from willing witches for the low price of only seven galleons per visit! Harry smothered a laugh when he heard Ron's comment about being glad that the Twins had paid him for testing some of their products over the Summer. He'd wondered if he would need to slip Ron some money, but it looked like he didn't need to after all.
He was glad he had taken a shower before breakfast because all four of his roommates seemed to suddenly discover a need to get cleaned up for some reason. While they were all heading for the showers he grabbed a stack of galleons from his trunk and went in search of Fred and George.
Arriving back in the common room, he wasn't particularly surprised to see that the only girls there were in the Third Year or younger, and he wondered if one of the girls in Gryffindor were going to be the one sucking him off shortly? He shrugged mentally unless one of the girls told him, he'd probably never know.
Checking his watch, he saw that it was almost 1:15 and was starting to wonder where the twins were? Just as he was about to head up to their dorm, the two of them came through the entrance into the common room and gestured for him to follow.
The three of them walked for several minutes until they stopped outside a door that looked extremely familiar. Opening the door, Fred (or George) grinned at him and said: "I thought you'd recognize this door, considering the adventure you, Ron and Hermione had when you were ickle firsties." Once the door closed behind them, he pulled out a piece of paper and handed it to Harry and said, "Read this,"
Looking at the scrawled handwriting, Harry concentrated and the words “The Glory Holes are in Fluffy's room.” When he finished reading, he saw that there were several holes in the wall, just about waist high, and he grinned, handing the paper back to whichever twin had handed it to him.
He also saw that each hole had a small mirror above it, and George (or Fred) said, “Nobody else is going to have any idea who is on the other side of the wall, but since you're our partner you get to know who's giving you a knobber, just in case you want to ask her out and see if she's willing to take her knickers off.”
The other twin frowned slightly and said, “All I ask is, if Ginny happens to be the one who takes her knickers off, don't tell us about it. Really don't want to know that much about her personal life, okay?”
Harry laughed, “No worries, I won't tell you if I manage to bugger your little sister!” The glare he got from both of them would have made Snape jealous if he'd seen it, but Harry just put up his hands “Kidding, just kidding! If I approach Ginny I'll make sure to keep the details to myself, promise!”
Anything that they were going to say was interrupted by a soft chime sounding in the room. The twins started grinning widely, “We've got girls in the room! Let's see who showed up first.”
Moving to the wall, Harry saw that he could see the face of each girl who was kneeling at the hole. He didn't recognize a couple of the older girls, except that he thought one of them was in Slytherin and the other was in Hufflepuff. He grinned when he saw that Hermione was one of the girls, and so was Lavender!
He was going to approach Lavender, just to see if she lived up to her reputation, but the mirror suddenly fogged, and one of the twins said, "When the mirror fogs it means that the girl is busy. We're the only ones with the mirrors if we were in one of the other rooms her hole just won't show up until she's available again."
“Makes sense,” Harry nodded, before moving to the hole where Su Li was waiting. He didn't really know the girl, she was always quite in the classes they had together, but he got the impression she was really shy, so it was a surprise to see her here.
Reaching into his money pouch, he counted out the seven galleons and dropped them into the slot, before putting a couple of more coins in his shirt pocket. Unzipping his trousers, he pulled his cock out of his boxers and slipped it into the hole. It was only a couple of seconds later that he groaned when he felt her tongue laving the bulb. “This is going to be great!”
The Room of Requirement
Same Time
Su Li had been waiting for the buzzing to let her know somebody was in the room and her wand tapped the galleon immediately. She briefly wondered how they got a portkey to work inside Hogwarts wards, but she didn't have time to think about it as she appeared inside a large, well lit circular room. Her first impression was that it was extremely clean, the pile of cushions in front of the various holes in the wall looked comfortable, and she was pleasantly surprised to see that there was a basin of water and a sponge at each location. She had been fortunate enough that the few boys she had been with all understood cleanliness, but for those who didn't, she could at least wash them off before putting her mouth on them.
Moving toward the wall, she heard the sound of other girls arriving and glanced over, wondering who else was going to be there with her. She watched as first Granger showed up and then Brown and Parvati, and Lisa Turpin. Abbott from the 'Puffs, and Greengrass? The Ice Queen was eager to get on her knees? That was interesting, it might be fun to get to know the Slytherin girl a bit better when she had the time.
But all that could wait, she was here for a reason, and she stopped in front of the nearest hole. Pulling her jumper off, she removed her bra and set the clothing aside. She heard a questioning sound from beside her and saw that Padma had arrived and was looking at her bare chest curiously.
“Just in case I can't swallow all of it, I don't want to have to change clothes before heading back to the Great Hall.”
Su hadn't realized that her voice would carry, but the other girls all nodded thoughtfully before they stripped out of their blouses and bras as well. She was tempted to check out the other girls, to see if Brown really was as big as she seemed, but there would be time for that later.
Kneeling in front of her chosen hole, she grinned when she recognized the wizard who stepped up to the hole. “Oh, this is going to be fun! I've got Potter!”
The witches who weren't already occupied turned to look at her, and she saw the looks of desire on several faces when the saw just how much Potter had. She heard a girl's voice behind her and turned to see Angelina Johnson standing there with a huge grin.
The older girl winked at her and said, “You're in for a treat, I had him in my mouth several times last night, and just you wait until you get to swallow his load!”
She didn't say anything, just sauntered away, her blouse and bra dangling from her hand.
Hearing the clattering of the coins landing in a tray by the hole, she glanced over and nodded at seeing the five galleons. She didn't really need the money, but it was nice to have. Once she was satisfied, Su settled in on the cushions and took a closer look at Potter's cock, he was actually clean-shaven, which was a nice surprise, he wasn't the virgin that the school rumors would have it, then. She had never heard of any guy that was shaved clean without a lot of experience with women. It showed that he was actually considerate of his partners and that took time to learn.
Opening her mouth, she ran her tongue over the swollen head, tasting the little bit of pre-cum that had already started seeping out of his slit. She blinked at the way it tingled on her tongue, sending pleasant shivers through her. 'How much power does Potter actually have? I've never even gotten this much of a tingle before?' she wondered, as she opened her mouth and took the head of his cock between her lips.
She sucked on the head while her hands wrapped around his shaft, stroking him as she moved forward, taking more of him in her mouth. He was a bit larger than any of her prior lovers, but still fit comfortably in her mouth and she moved her tongue against him.
Once she had taken him as deep as she could, she slowly pulled back, her hands stroking him again and fondling his balls where they were hanging through the hole in the wall. It was strange that she couldn't hear any reaction, but it made sense in keeping things anonymous, the guys wouldn't know that she and the others could see who they were servicing, and hearing each other's voices would give them a clue.
She shoved the distracting thoughts away, she wanted to focus on giving Potter the best knobber she could, it was all about improving her skills after all. She switched between licking his shaft and head and then taking him deep in her mouth while her hands fondled his warm flesh.
Su lost track of how long she had been sucking him, all she noticed was that she would occasionally get bursts of pleasure as his seed seeped onto her tongue. It was only when she felt his sac tighten that she realized he was about to cum!
Pulling back so that just the head was in her mouth, she lowered herself to get a better angle. The way she was tingling from just a little bit of his cum, she wanted to be able to swallow everything he gave her, the sensations should be amazing!
She had just gotten herself into position when he swelled inside her mouth and she felt the first blast of his cum hitting the back of her throat. She started swallowing immediately, and was glad she did because a second blast followed, and then a third. She barely registered the last burst of cum, because the magic in the first one was careening through her body setting every nerve ending ablaze with pleasure!
Su forced herself to stay in position, wanting to get every last drop of Potter's cum into her body, even though his magic had already triggered one of the most amazing orgasms she'd ever experienced in her 17 years! The last coherent thought she had was 'Potter can keep his money, for an orgasm like that I'd suck him for free!' before the sensations overwhelmed her and she released him from her mouth and let the feelings take her away until she knew no more.
It was only when she came back to herself that she saw Padma and a couple of the other girls staring at her in awe, and Padma said, “Okay, to hell with the OWLs, I'm going to have him in my mouth as soon as possible, are you with me 'Vati?”
It wasn't just Parvati that answered, just about all of the girls who had seen Su's orgasm were eager to experience it for themselves. Especially when Su happened to notice that there were several other galleons on the tray, and a slip of parchment with the words “A Tip” scrawled on it.
Su barely had time to get a drink of water to clean out her mouth before another cock was sliding through the wall. Glancing up, she recognized Terry Boot from her class and went back to work.
Slytherin Fifth Year Girls Dorm
Later that Afternoon
As soon as the galleon popped her back into her dorm, Daphne Greengrass grabbed her shower gear and cast her strongest notice me not spell on herself before slipping out of the room. She knew that Pansy and Tracey would be eager to gossip, and she was looking forward to it as well, but right now she really needed to think!
She was well aware, as were most pure-blood and half-blood witches, about the rumors concerning swallowing the cum of a powerful wizard, but she'd thought they were nothing but rumors. At least, until she watched that 'Claw practically pass out from swallowing Potter's cum, and not getting any reaction from a couple of pure-bloods. Daphne would have passed it off as just Potter being Potter, but then she had found herself face to, well, cock with that muggle-born Gryffindor, Thomas she thought his name was, and she experienced the same thing!
The only pure-blood wizards that she noticed causing their witch to climax were those three Weasley's, and Longbottom. Boot, no reaction, McMillan, no reaction, McClaggen, no reaction. Even the couple of Slytherins didn't cause any reaction, and Travers and Montague were considered powerful wizards.
Daphne dropped the notice me not when she walked into the showers, still thinking, only to pause when she saw Agatha Rosier, one of the Seventh Years who had been in the room, standing naked under the shower and looking at her. A strange expression crossed the older girls face before she beckoned Daphne over. Stripping out of her bathrobe, Daphne walked toward the girl, putting an eager smile on her face.
Daphne really wasn't pleased to see the older girl, not only because she was one of the biggest blood purists in the house, and was sure that she was going to want to rant about the mudbloods and blood traitors, but also because her tastes were far more extreme than Daphne was comfortable with.
Unfortunately, there wasn't anything she could do, the girl was a prefect and had certain privileges, even though her house was technically lower than the Greengrass's. Daphne only went along to keep the older girl from targeting Astoria, her sister was still too young for what Agatha enjoyed doing to the other girls.
It came as a surprise when Rosier pulled her into her arms and whispered in her ear, “Play along, you know we are being monitored, so don't react to what I'm saying!”
Daphne didn't really know what to think, but her habits of caution came out and she moaned softly when the older girl started sucking on her throat, fingers sliding between her thighs. Agatha's voice was harsh in her ear as she hissed
“We need to talk, what happened earlier is making me rethink the purity issue, and I could see you had the same reaction. When we finish here, come up to my room, I'll make sure we aren't monitored.”
She nodded slightly, doing her best to hide her confusion. This was not what she expected when Agatha called her over, not at all! She gave a loud moan as Agatha bit down lightly on her throat, the girl's fingers shoving into her pussy and stroking quickly. Daphne couldn't help it, she was already aroused from swallowing Thomas' cum, and Agatha knew exactly how to touch her to get her going. She didn't have to like the girl to enjoy the way she made her feel after all.
Daphne shifted slightly, so her mouth was at the older girl's breasts and she captured one of the nipples in her mouth, sucking eagerly as her hand moved to toy with Agatha's pussy. She could feel by the way the other girl was clenching around her fingers that Agatha was just as aroused, and she did her best to bring the other girl to climax so she could cum herself.
It didn't take long for Agatha to cum, biting down hard on the tender flesh of Daphne's throat as she shuddered in her climax, and the jerking of her fingers inside Daphne was just enough to push her over the edge as well. The two of the collapsed against each other, the wall of the shower supporting them and the water pouring down.
After they caught their breath, Agatha pushed herself back up and grabbed Daphne by the hair, tilting her face up and said: "Not bad Greengrass, not bad at all, you're getting better, but now I want you to show me if you've gotten any better with your mouth!"
Lowering herself to her knees on the hard tile floor, Daphne moved between the girl's thighs and started licking, spitting out the hair that got on her tongue in annoyance. She just hoped that the older girl would be satisfied with just being licked, and not want to get 'creative' when they got up to her rooms. It had taken several days for her to be able to move normally again after the last time. And that bastard Snape stood in the doorway and watched every minute of it!
Of course, watching Agatha have to bend over and spread her arse for Snape to bugger her did give Daphne a thrill of satisfaction, especially since the bastard didn't bother getting her prepared. The look of pain on the girl's face was rather enjoyable, especially when he pulled out and made her suck him clean!
Remembering how excited watching that got her, Daphne started licking enthusiastically, and managed to get the older girl off fairly quickly. Of course, kneeling as she was made it easy for Agatha's nails to scratch deeply into the skin on her back, but she just did her best to ignore the pain and kept licking until the girl was satisfied.
She winced when Agatha pushed her away, making her fall on her back on the tile floor. The older girl stepped back under the water and rinsed off before turning to Daphne and saying, "You still need a lot of practice, Greengrass. If you don't want me to see if your sister is any more talented, you'll hurry up and finish your shower and come up to my room!"
Wrapping a towel around her hair, the other girl left the shower, seemingly ignoring the look of pain on Daphne's face.
Headmaster's Office
Earlier that Afternoon
Albus was sitting alone in his office when he felt the shifting of the wards. Glancing at the clock on the wall, he smiled slightly when he saw that it was just exactly 1:30 in the afternoon. He had to give the Weasley boys credit, they had been rather ingenious when they developed those galleons. It was fortunate that he had discovered their plan over the summer and adjusted the wards on the school to allow them to function, otherwise, it would have been impossible to transport the volunteers to that delightful room.
Of course, they had no idea that he was aware of the whole thing, and he was going to allow them to keep their happy ignorance. They weren't hurting anyone or forcing anyone to participate, so as long as they didn't draw attention to themselves there was no reason to interfere. Besides, with what Harry had to face anything that helped him to relax was a very good thing, at least until he was able to get that individual the Ministry had inflicted on them out of the school.
He didn't actually have any interest in observing what Harry and the others were doing, he was far too old for that, but it was useful to be aware of the locations of the students at any given time. He had learned that lesson almost too late to help Miss Weasley during the diary incident, but he had made the necessary changes over that summer so he could find anyone that he needed.
Unfortunately, those changes had also forced him to reconsider his protection of Severus. He had been willing to allow the man a certain leeway in his behavior over the years, but ever since Tom had returned he had been paying far closer attention to what his spy had been doing. He had to admit that having young Mister Malfoy in his office for an extended period of time could be perfectly innocent, the uncomfortable way the boy was moving and the slightly glazed expression in his eyes concerned Albus greatly.
He had set an alert to advise him whenever Severus was moving anywhere in Slytherin House other than the common areas, just to make sure that nothing untoward was happening. He really didn't like to think that the man had somehow found a way around his oaths, but if he was truly interfering with any of the students that way, he would have to go. He was well aware that certain people felt he went too far in offering second chances, but even his patience and understanding had limits. Those who had the misfortune of hitting those limits certainly regretted it for the few minutes of life they had left, anyway.
Hearing a soft chime, he looked up to see that Minerva was coming up the stairs to his office and he signaled for the guardian to move aside for her. Gesturing toward the door, it opened as she approached and he was waiting with a genial smile when she walked in.
Gryffindor Common Room
Later that Afternoon
Harry was alone when he walked into the common room that afternoon. He had left the room on the third-floor corridor long after Fred and George had departed. The twins were in awe of the fact that he was ready to go again only a few minutes after he had flooded Su Li's mouth and given her a massive orgasm.
It was a good thing that he was alone the next time, because it was Ginny who was the next to enjoy the effect his magic had on her, and he didn't think that the twins would appreciate knowing that their sister was either a very talented amateur or had a great deal of experience with a cock in her mouth.
Looking around the common room, he had to struggle to keep his face impassive when he saw the appraising looks on Hermione, Lavender, and Parvati who were sitting together in front of the fireplace. Not to mention the knowing grins from Angelina and Katie who were sitting with the twins on the other side of the room.
Waving at the assorted groups he headed up the stairs toward his room, and when he got there he almost burst out laughing. All four of his roommates were laying on their beds with stupid grins on their faces. He shook his head, he had been younger than any of them the first time he got a suck and he was full of energy for hours afterward!
Granted, the first time he had bedded Fleur and Tonks together he had needed a rest afterward, but that was a completely different situation. A mature Veela and a kinky metamorph would be enough to wear out a satyr, and he was just a normal teenage guy! Fortunately, his stamina improved over the summer and the last time he had actually worn the two of them out. He had a strong suspicion that was why they managed to get Narcissa to agree to join them.
He had no idea how Narcissa managed to get away from her husband, especially since she obviously didn't share his support for Voldemort, but it seemed to amuse her a great deal to be sharing his bed that weekend. It was just too bad that he couldn't taunt the ferret with what had happened, but the consequences wouldn't be worth the momentary satisfaction. Of course, once Voldemort and his Death Eaters were taken care of, there was nothing saying that he couldn't get close to Narcissa again, really rub it in Draco's face!
A loud fart coming from the direction of Ron's bed pulled him from his memories of Narcissa and he grimaced, he had planned on writing a letter to Sirius while stretched out on his bed, but with the foul smell filling the room that wasn't going to happen. Turning around he shut the door behind him and walked back down to the common room.
When he got there, he was mildly surprised to see that Hermione and Lavender had left already, leaving Parvati sitting by herself. She looked up when he walked into the room and gave him a smile, waving him over.
Sitting down next to her, he tensed when he saw that she had her wand in her hand and he watched her warily. She giggled, “Don't worry Harry, you haven't done anything that would make me try and use my wand on you. I just need to talk to you without anybody listening in, okay?”
Harry nodded, he didn't think he'd done anything to annoy her, in fact, they were on fairly good terms now, once she and her sister understood what had happened the night of the Yule Ball, but he still didn't like anybody having their wand out around him when it wasn't a classroom situation. He was actually rather impressed with the strength of the privacy spells Parvati cast, and when she finished he grinned at her,
“So what did you want to talk about, Parvati? The charms you just cast make me doubt it's about the summer homework for Divination.”
Parvati gave him a mock glare before grinning, "If I wrote up what I wanted to talk about as homework I think Professor Trelawney would faint. I know that we kind of discussed seeing each other casually after that mess at the Ball, and I'm still willing to do that, but I want something more if you are willing."
He could tell that she was nervous, but his magic was also telling him that she was extremely aroused, even if she was hiding it, so he was fairly sure he knew where she was leading. He didn't show any of his thoughts as he nodded, “What do you need, Parvati? If I can give it to you I will.”
Seeing the flash of desire in Parvati's eyes convinced him, and he was prepared when she dropped her hand into his lap and stroked his hardening cock through his trousers. She leaned close to him, her breath warm in his ear as she said, “I want this, I want you to take me someplace private and shag my brains out! I'm on the potion, so you don't have to worry about getting me up the duff. I'm not looking for a commitment, we can worry about that later if we need to, I just don't want to regret not taking the chance to be with you, if something happens.”
Harry leaned in and gave her a soft kiss, before saying, “I'd love to! And I know a place a lot more comfortable than an empty classroom or broom cupboard. Are you ready now?”
She smiled widely and stood, her wand removing the privacy charms, and she took his hand. They were heading out the door without looking back. If they had, they would have seen Lavender and Hermione standing at the foot of the stairs watching them, smiles on their faces.
Lavender softly said, “No regrets, Hermione? You know 'Vati would have given you first shot if you'd wanted it.”
Hermione shook her head, "No, we're better just being friends. Adding sex to things, especially with Ron still working up his nerve would complicate things too much. Besides, we'd drive each other insane if we tried to have a relationship, we're both too stubborn to make it work." Then she smirked, "Of course, if you and Parvati want to save me a treat after your time with him, I'll be happy to clean it up for you!"
Lavender snorted, “Merlin you're a bad girl, Hermione! What are we going to do with you?”
Giving her roommate her most innocent look Hermione said, “Spank me?” before the two of them broke out into giggles and turned to go back up the stairs. If Lavender's hand happened to give Hermione's rear a swat as they hurried to their dorm, well, that was nobodies business but theirs, was it?
Headmaster's Office
Approximately the Same Time
Albus sat back and rubbed his eyes tiredly, Minerva had been furious over some comments that Madame Umbridge had made and needed to vent at him at great length. He sympathized with her unhappiness, he really did, but his hands were tied at the moment. He just didn't have the ability to remove her at the moment. The Minister was actually being fairly clever for a change in using his inability to find an instructor for Defense as a lever to get his lackey into the school.
His Deputy had finally calmed down and returned to her office a few minutes before. She wasn't any happier than she was when she arrived but at least she understood his situation as well. He really hoped that the rest of the afternoon would be fairly calm, he had far too much work to get through before dinner.
Unfortunately, that was a futile hope, because no sooner had Albus picked up the next file from his desk the alert he had on Severus sounded, and the tone was far more urgent this time. Concentrating on the wards, he swore under his breath, the man was in a hidden alcove, looking into one of the upper year girl's rooms and there were two students in the room as well.
He really didn't like doing this, but needs must. Standing, he ordered Hogwarts to open a viewing window into the room and his worst fears were confirmed, the two girls were completely nude and occupied with each other, not even noticing that they were being watched. Closing the viewer, he really didn't need to watch the girls enjoying themselves, and he activated the ward he'd put into place when he started getting suspicious of Severus' activities.
Albus felt the ward take effect, and he opened a portal behind his soon to be ex Potions Professor and summoned him into his office.
The man was still stunned by being captured by the wards and his harsh landing in Albus' office, and Albus didn't give him a chance to recover. He petrified the man before tearing through his mental shields as if they were tissue paper. What he saw made him physically ill, and he forced down the bile rising his throat, there would be time for being sick later. Withdrawing from the vile man's mind, Albus left him frozen and moved back behind his desk and woke the man.
As soon as Snape became aware of his location, he tried to move but was still frozen in place, with Albus looking at him calmly. "Hello Severus, so nice of you to join me. It seems it's time for us to have a bit of a chat because I'm very disappointed in you my boy."
The frozen man couldn't do anything but listen as his crimes were recited back to him, going back to the first days after he pretended to be Dumbledore's spy, all the rapes and the killing, the Order members who had been killed because of information he provided to the Dark Lord, everything, including the petty attacks on Potter and Longbottom, were dredged up, and something that the Headmaster was doing caused physical pain with each incident.
By the time Professor Dumbledore reached this afternoon, his enjoyment of watching Rosier playing with Greengrass, his entire body felt like it was on fire, agony worse than anything the Dark Lord had done to him wracking his body and he was crying in pain. But there was no mercy, no reprieve, the voice was implacable as it went over his crimes until he finally understood what the other man was saying, the orders he would have to obey, and a tiny part of his awareness was impressed at just how ruthless the old man was. He had no choice, he would follow the orders, even though it meant his death, at least the pain would stop.
Albus stared at the shell of his former potions professor and felt nothing but disgust. Casting the final spell on the man, he double checked where Tom was supposed to be and used his robes as a portkey to the Nott Manor and sent him on his way. Calling for Fawkes, he had his Phoenix transport him to the outer ward line of the Nott home to watch the fireworks, and hopefully capture Tom's wraith if at all possible.
A few seconds later the office was completely empty.
End Chapter Two
Wow! That took some turns I wasn't expecting, but it was fun to write a proactive Albus for a change.
See you next time
Red
Comments
Still going strong great stories
Peter Farnsworth II
2019-02-02 17:47:07 +0000 UTCAnother fun chapter and how did that plot creep in there? I take it the characters are telling their own story? In any case, a very enjoyable and promising read. I did find one typo, ",,,she was always quite..." should, I believe, be "...she was always quiet...".
Cateagle
2019-01-22 18:09:41 +0000 UTCGood Morning, glad you enjoyed the chapter. As for Hermione, I've left her out of a few of the recent stories because they were commissions and the person who gave the commission didn't want her included. In a couple of my own stories it was deliberate because I needed a change, I've written her with Harry so many times, usually as his primary wife/girlfriend whatever that it was getting boring to write. That doesn't mean that she won't show up in future stories though.
Red Jacobson
2019-01-18 12:21:40 +0000 UTCGreat Chapter as usual. Something stuck me while reading it though. In a number of your most recent stories, you're quickly excluding Hermione from being part of the potential 'harem', usually with the same reason (that the relationship wouldn't work). Is that an intentional will to move away from the relationship or just a coincidence that these particular stories would work better in your mind without Hermione part of the main group ? I'm curious about it .
blackimp
2019-01-18 08:29:26 +0000 UTCAnother great chapter, Red, keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chapter - as well as your next chapter of "BTVS: The Return".
Charlie A
2019-01-15 23:51:03 +0000 UTC