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Celestial smith chapter 28

Celestial smith chapter 28: When faced with reality we crumble

Desperation sets in as seen by the Tywin.

Just a small 3k chapter towards Winterfell and the waiting lords of the north and hopefully (Typing speed willing) the confrontation between the north and the south

Also a Chat gpt pic of what the special cannons on moat Cailin and Owens ships look like. (Though ship ones aren't as thicc)

Comments

i know he is all into building up the walls of his castles but its time for flying ships and more advanced carts. ohh, better yet, make one of those magic carts that float around off the ground. I know he want teleportations but what about trains that run on a schedule between towns. This spreads out the infrastructure for the small folks and provide more jobs.

Big ToFu

The south really has nothing to offer the north. For negotiations both sides need to have something the other wants. North has land and a means to develop it, food, money and weapons. What can the south offer it that is of any benefit. If they have a marriage the daughter would be moving to a backwater.

Big Black Chemist

True no Northmen on the small counsel, Jon Arryn screwed everyone over and put his men in power. I think even the riverlands got screwed. The only one who benefited are the Lannisters (that kind of pull lord Frey) and the Vale.

Big Black Chemist

I sincerely hope that another house gets a marriage proposal in before the Lannisters. They will be brought up, as sure as the sun’s rise, but I bet literally every other Southern house was having a similar conversation at the exact same time the Lannisters were.

ShinySpiritomb

The smarter option would be to marry Myrcella to Bran.

Hayden Williams

Is that, like, 20 cents? If so I can do it kkkkkkkkkk

carlos henrique

I somehow can completely see Joffrey fucking up so badly that Tywin straight up gives his head to the Starks in apology

carlos henrique

I absolutely LOVE this chapter! I hate Tywin but would totally lose my shit with Cersei too after seeing the changes in the North! His concerns for his house and ambitions are valid. I mean he's not the only one after the Norths prosperity, and to have his daughter (who HE made queen) spit on a chance to bind themselves to that wealth because she thinks her idiot son is too good for a Stark!? Damn, I FELT his disappointment!

Rachel N

pawnshop.meme

Ed Z

I don't think Aria will be married off.

Iori Daemona Angel

Thanks for the update!!

Hazel D

please have joffrey screw up so he ends up dead soon

weird song

Arya as Queen to Joffrey will end with him dead. I cannot think of a faster way to have war. This entire scene with Tywin even further alienating his kids is pointless, makes it very, very funny.

thevolunteer

Ned Stark is an honorable fool but no way his bannermen are going to allow the South to take everything the North has built for themselves. The North put Robert on the throne and what did they get for it? Stormlands got a King, Westerlands a Queen, The Vale Hand of the King, the river lands married into two Kingdoms, while The North just got a pat on the back. The North Remembers

Richard Alvarez

First one to send me a Morbiliion dollars reads it first, lol

Xuzar Horan

Can’t wait for the next chapter, what timeline can we expect?

Srikar Pakala


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