Dogmen book 1 -- second alpha draft, chapter 1
Added 2016-05-27 21:15:29 +0000 UTCHaving gotten stuck halfway through with the last draft of Love And Other Lies, I sat on the idea for a while until I saw Zootopia, at which point I realized my major problem. I was pushing the story to be a lot darker than I needed, when the setting was already plenty dark. On top of this, I needed Spencer to be a better protagonist, more active and ultimately more optimistic, despite the potential brutality.
So I re-outlined the story and have a different direction to go. The second alpha is starting from the beginning. It will be in the inboxes of $3+ patrons momentarily.
