Some DanCre re-design
Added 2020-06-30 08:44:46 +0000 UTCSince the one illustration per month plan never goes well, I want to do some comic clips as a practice based on my old storyboards. Before starting, some of their designs are changed so it's less awkward to draw. Also as a practice to improve my messiness linework. (Still pretty messy I assume, will do more practice this week)
每月一張插圖的計畫未果，前幾週甚至卡死在連草稿都畫不順的狀態。於是這個月做了些調整，目前還在測試這些調整有沒有用，為了測試，決定先拿些舊分鏡畫成漫畫做練習，然而畢竟都是十年前的角色，有些造型設計真的怎麼畫怎麼尷尬，所以就先著手重新修改成比較適合自己詮釋的樣子，順便也當做畫墨線稿的練習(成果還是蠻雜亂的，這幾天內會持續改進)
Months ago I tried to make a 'simple' R18 DanCre story, but overall I found all clips need a decent storyboard...or maybe I'm just not equipped for doing smut fanbook ;_; Whenever I did storyboards, my ideas often ran crazy with actions and complex buildings. (The best example is what I did with Possessors) Thus I need to find a way to draw...literally everything, and make them all readable. And avoiding too much messiness is also where my weakness lies, which I'm going to improve in next few weeks.
三月時我原本想先畫本純h無腦漫當練習，本來以為這樣比較簡單，結果不知為何...我可能更不會畫無腦H漫(抱頭)連分鏡都卡住，找不到值得詮釋的焦點。但手邊現有的其他故事分鏡，都充滿照理來說更難畫的背景建築和打鬥場面...總之...我還是得想辦法先畫出像樣的墨線稿才行，至少希望比幾年前那本Possessors更乾淨一點、人物更不崩一點。所以接下來幾週、我會著手朝改進可讀性畫起。
Comments
Thanks! May I know where you're going to use this design? It's okay if it's only for personal use, and credit me if you need to publish your personal work on social media.
2020-06-30 17:33:33 +0000 UTCI like this. Is it okay if I use this redesign?
2020-06-30 17:25:46 +0000 UTCWow thanks again for the comment! I guess I'm used to be old school and worry about the printing result too much XD It's a relieve to know people are okay with it. If one scene contains more depth in the background (forest, nature, castle, etc..) , my messiness linework will really struggle to make it readable, or even accomplish it, so I want to learn how to draw by 100% opacity black, or some colors closed to it, so I can simplify everything in pure black/white, and less grey tone means less object to deal with. 🤔
2020-06-30 15:11:01 +0000 UTCAhh clarity and readability are the goals of every serious artist, so I feel youX) Personally I think your smut scenes are very iconic as it's tied to your style of storytelling, and I didn't have any issue following the panel sequences. So I think your flow is fine. I think you simplifying their designs while making them very recognisable would definitely help in decluttering your pages. I'm excited to see your next steps (I just love your analyses^_^).
2020-06-30 14:05:23 +0000 UTCWoah you're too kind XD I'll add some smut to the practice!
2020-06-30 09:44:26 +0000 UTCHaha Thanks XD I often lost the focus when stretching smut scene to, like, all fanbook. Only 2-3 pages are probably fine and a full story still requires some other scenarios. In the end it's inevitable to learn to ink everything I guess😅
2020-06-30 09:35:17 +0000 UTCOh but your smut is fine! All of your artwork is fine <3
Niuniente
2020-06-30 09:28:48 +0000 UTCI think your smut was perfectly fine, but maybe that's just me being happy to see your work. :D
K T
2020-06-30 09:02:40 +0000 UTC
