(R18) Erotic expression charts x2
Added 2019-09-19 14:02:18 +0000 UTC I'm having sinfully amount of fun doing this chart...
一不小心就在這個問卷上浪費太多時間(艸)
Dante as bottom - refined sketch
蛋丁(受) - 細化草稿版
Dante as bottom - rough sketch:
蛋丁(受) - 粗略草稿版
Credo as bottom - sketch:
騎士長(受) - 草稿
Canceled sketches:
沒採用的草稿
Both of them are somewhat challenging in different aspects... I got stuck in the third row(the 9-12th panels) of Dante's expressions because I'm a bit lacking to depict a purely joyful and shameless personality.😏 I'd like to think his response is adjustable depends on what situation he's dealing with so he can always yield a good result of it.
蛋丁問卷畫到第三列的時候感到有些卡關，呈現無羞恥心的性感表情好難啊。個人腦補他能針對不同對象/情況改變反應，以得到雙方都能滿意的結果，簡單來說就是EQ高啦。
And Credo is as always, very hard to draw without making him looks too old or too young. He is unfamiliar to express intimate emotions and not able to express it elegantly either. So his expression range is probably limited in an ill-favored range. However, he is more familiar with expressing pain and anger, so I kinda merge his lust and joy with them.
至於大舅子則一如既往地難畫，都畫他十年了還是很容易畫走樣。個人腦補的大舅子不擅進行任何較親密的互動，反應也很不優雅，導致他的表情演出落在一個不怎麼討好的範圍裡。又話說他可能很習慣表達出痛苦或憤怒，所以我通常把他的欲望藏在這類表情裡。
I've wasted too much time refining the sketches so welp I probably won't ink them. :/ But instead I edited some of the quest titles and improved the ideas and compositions.
填這兩張問卷花了比預計多的時間，就不打算上墨線了，但我有盡量改良想法和構圖，與其把線稿清乾淨，個人更希望能完整把點子畫出來。(畫太慢的藉口)
The blank charts are also in the attachments if you're interested to complete your own version 😘
附件也再次附上兩種版本的空白問卷，有興趣請隨意抱回去填嘿！沒有任何規則！
Comments
Oh thank you for taking time to comment! It's such an enjoyment to read your feedback, and excuse me for replying this late 😅 High-quality angst 😂😂 I love your summary. You really nailed what I thought while drawing, since I still lack the vocabulary to explain. Depicting conflicting emotions is fun and I found Credo always gives me the best result haha. I really like the idea that he needs to fight his own anxiety every time trying to give away his control and get alone with Dante, but somehow he can be very passionate --and immediately regret-- about it. Masochism maybe😂 There is no way that Dante can't satisfy him *wink* so I thought it requires me to change the final title. In the pixiv original charts, the final one is "不滿足" which means unsatisfied, and I assume it is kind of a comic relief. And switch it from unsatisfied to regret makes it even funnier. Speaking of being subtle, it might be the better word to describe his emotion. But I want to separate his character from Vergil who should also act in a subtle way. Credo shares his anger and anxiety more often and plainly, has an older looking face, and probably acting more awkwardly towards any kind of intimacy. I guess overall it's harder for a fandom to find this kind of character attractive. Somehow I really like it though, probably because he is more realistic --and still remains his charm, or I just have a weird taste-- to me. Speaking of the angles, I printed their in-game faces of various angles and put them on the wall as cheat sheets XD I happened to discover a better way to draw during finishing this chart, hopefully will find other chances to experiment more :D
2019-09-30 08:18:51 +0000 UTCWow, where do I start? I already expressed the awe for the Dante chart- it's STEAMY that's for sure. I love the fluid changes in expressions and how well you capture his attitude. I also think that the changes in chart itself serve the storytelling better and looking at it feels more immersive! Cancelled sketches are awesome too! I especially like numbers 5 and 10. 5 is just raw dynamism and 10 endears me with it's gesture, I love the shapes there. But Credo one? I think I like it even more, since I'm a connoisseur of high quality angst xD But no, really I think that because of the conflicted emotions, it has even stronger and more striking storytelling feeling. There's way more emotional struggle at his end, more questioning and difficulty in giving away the control and just enjoying the moment. The change from „Unsatisfied” to „Regret” is a great idea, it totally shifted the character of this mini-storyline. I think his expressions aren't limited- they feel more subtle and like i mentioned they give the feeling of unease on Credo's end- absolutely adore that. I love seeing how well you handle not only the art but also the narrative, it's really inspiring! And I always forget to mention- you handle the angles so well, it's always pleasing to look at your compositions. I can't wait to see the upcoming artwork!
V
2019-09-24 06:16:01 +0000 UTCThank you! ♥
2019-09-20 07:49:26 +0000 UTCThanks! Glad you noticed, I spent the most time manage to fit a better composition to those small panels.
2019-09-20 07:49:10 +0000 UTCThank you! ♥ I'm happy to found out I can still do sketches haha. Been worried about how my workspace affects my abIlity for a while.
2019-09-20 07:45:40 +0000 UTCI love you) And this art. =3
2019-09-19 18:46:47 +0000 UTCYou've done quite a good bit in such small spaces. I like seeing how you chose to interpret them for both. *fans self a lot*
K T
2019-09-19 17:40:55 +0000 UTCThese are fantastic, and very expressive. ♥
Night Excision
2019-09-19 16:13:30 +0000 UTC
