If I could give a bit of opinion, I like it but I also find it hard to read and understand wh'ats going on because it's too dark. I get that it's inside a club so it's meant to be dark, but I think you could turn on the luminosity just a tadd bit and it would still be understandable that it's dark / night time but it would be easier to read ? IDK it's just my opinion. As usual I still find your art very great :)