Volume 1 Feedback
Added 2024-03-04 22:43:29 +0000 UTCNow that it’s out, here’s a post release thread. Please let me know your comments on the book here, how you liked it, and so on.
Currently I’m taking a break and watching the reception. I’ll likely move onto planning out the first bit of volume two this week, just don’t want to rush into it until I’ve seen how the story is doing.
Comments
Thank you so much, this is really one of the nicest comments I've received which is saying a lot. If it makes you feel better the book has done phenomenally well so I'm in a much better place than I was when writing the blurb. I'm very happy that the themes resonated with you, we'll be getting into much, much more of that from here on out so I hope you're ready for even more emotional healing and all that fun stuff! A hard copy is definitely something I'm looking into doing, and it wouldn't actually take me long since I can just do it through Amazon. I just haven't felt like formatting the ebook for it yet. Also at the very least the chibis might end up as stickers on redbubble down the line since I do have commercial license.
PunishedKom
2024-04-11 07:51:30 +0000 UTCI just finished this book a few minutes ago. Absolutely loved it. Binged it in a day. After reading your blurb at the end on how this book had taken a toll on you, I wanted to let you know that I appreciate you pushing through and delivering an exceptional book. I think your protagonist is very relatable to a lot of people in this day and age, and it was nice to see them working through their issues and showing that even if we're broken in some way, that people can still love us and open up to share how they're broken as well. I can't wait for the next book to come out! I share your disappointment that the image files had to be removed. They definitely help paint the world in a visual drama style. I'd love to get my hands on a hard copy, and it would be cool if there was a sticker pack that could be purchased with the images on them. Or maybe a special edition that has them printed in color. If you ever do plan on making hard copies, I'd be the first one to sign up for your kickstarter/pre-order on Amazon. Regardless, after reading your book, I had to come over here and throw my support behind you. Thanks again and congrats on a job well done!
Alexander J Hale
2024-04-11 07:42:20 +0000 UTCThank you so much! I cannot fathom being able to read that fast holy shit lmao. I’m very flattered to hear that, though, and I hope you like what’s out of volume 2 so far.
PunishedKom
2024-04-03 00:36:20 +0000 UTCFantastic series man. Chomped through this book in about 2 hours and enjoyed all of it. You do such a great job of developing the characters, the humor is great (Bradley IS the {best bro}), and the build up is worth every page. Enough for me to hop over here to support ya and check out your other books. Keep up the work and take all the mental and physical rest you need, it's worth the wait!
Darshar Griffonmane
2024-04-03 00:28:23 +0000 UTCThank you so much!
PunishedKom
2024-03-05 21:25:35 +0000 UTCHad to sub here after finishing the book on Amazon, enjoyed write what you know, but this seems even better , looking forward to more
Texayk
2024-03-05 15:17:32 +0000 UTCSo I haven't read the amazon version but if there weren't many changes from the patreon release to Amazon then my opinion stays the same. I love Oliver and his ever chapter coming to terms with while yes while he was young he had a very toxic outlook on life and women it didn't mean he didn't deserve an amazing girl like Mia. I also like him coming to terms with Stacy not being as bad as he thinks. On top of that learning that his relationship counter isn't just one way was nice. Mia is just all around amazing and supportive and cute. She is definitely tied for number 2 favorite character with Rebecca. Finally Bradley he is number one. His helpfulness and ability to be there at the perfect time is great. His comic relief ability without even knowing he does it is hilarious. I also love his yandereness with complete glee. I am excited for next volume and Mia reaching max love. I am sorry that amazon had the art taken out of it. Maybe you can release a book with all the commissioned art to at least get some money back for it.
AzureXIII
2024-03-04 23:43:41 +0000 UTC
