WWYK #2 Outline
Added 2023-06-25 01:37:13 +0000 UTCThis shaped up very fast. Hopefully the book does as well!
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Couple of Days Later
- It’s been four days since last book. It’s Monday, and they just shared a nice weekend together.
- We open on Nate trying to write something again. He’s at his desk, not dictating but typing. He’d be interrupted by his moaning if he tried. He’s desperately working his hardest and hanging on for dear life, but he’s only barely able to type a few words every now and then. This experiment isn’t going well and Nate tries to say as much.
- Nicki is under his desk, and she’s been edging him with hands and mouth like her life depends on it. She tells him tough and that he can hold it off. Nicki was trying to give Nate inspiration to write a story about someone being edged by a cheeky maid while trying to work on something important, and this was her idea on how to do it.
- Of course, there’s another reason Nicki has been edging him and why she’s in a bad mood. They spent the weekend together and binge watched Ranking of Kings while fucking non stop, and they just finished that morning and Nicki is grumpy. She loved it and was extremely invested, but it was NOT the kind of show Nate said it was. Thus, she’s getting back at him for teasing her.
- Nate deserved it and wasn’t against what was happening, but they’d been doing this for around an hour and it was close to making him lose his mind. He’d edged himself with sex toys before, but a real woman doing it to him was insane. Worse, Nicki was really good at this. She knew exactly when to stop and when to get back to it.
- He asks why she’s so good at this and Nicki points out it’s super easy to tell when he’s about to cum. First he makes really cute moans, then his balls start to tighten, and then his cock starts to throb really hard. Then she just has to stop or apply the right amount of pressure to make him stop. She demonstrates by bringing him to the edge right now and then squeezing him in a way to stop the orgasm before going hands off.
- He calls her a demon but she reiterates that he’s the demon for showing her Ranking of Kings. He counters she liked it, and Nicki counters and he likes this. Nate can’t really argue that. It’s inspiring him a lot, and Nicki taunts him about how huge the cumshot is gonna be and that it’s worth it.
- She asks him how far along he is and he’s about fifteen hundred words into the outline. She says to get it to 2k and she’ll let him blow all over her face. He can finish the rest later. Nate gets inspired by this and grits his teeth. He then summons up the willpower to get deeper into his writing and really, really get it done. His fingers go mad and he forces himself to go into a zen like state despite the constant pleasure that Nicki was providing.
- 500 words wasn’t a lot for him, especially not when inspired, but for Nate atm it’s life or death. He keeps going, detailing some early ideas for what the story could be like all while Nicki does her worst until he finally makes it and Nicki congratulates him, asking how he wants to do this. He’ll do it himself to get back at her.
- Nicki is cool with this and teases him to do his worst, which he does. He grabs his cock and jerks it like mad until he sprays a gigantic load all over Nicki’s face and even her hair. When he’s done it’s like holy shit, but Nate says what did you expect, you know I cum a lot and edging is obviously only gonna make that worse. She’s like yeah but I didn’t know I was gonna need a full fucking shower when I was done.
- Nate reminds her that she’s not done and then takes his phone from the desk, takes a pic. It’s become a huge habit for them. Nicki loves that and over the last couple of days she’s been sending more of the pics they take to her friends on discord, who she insists are interested in seeing more. She won’t let him look at the chat but he’s fine with that, even though he’s excited about the idea now that he’s had some time to think about it.
- Nicki says she’s gonna go wash up real quick and if he wants to take a break from writing he can meet her downstairs. Nate says a break would be good and she goes off. We get some more details of the last couple of days, specifically how the relationship has been developing.
- Things have been great, but aside from getting the last short story finished, there hasn’t been much progress in Nate’s writing. That was understandable, as he was just getting used to having a girlfriend and having sex. Things have been pretty wild on that front, but there haven’t been any more concentrated efforts to knock anything off the Sex Note besides a few things here and there.
- They’ve mostly just been fucking like crazy at the drop of a hat. They would’ve been done with Ranking of Kings a lot sooner if they could keep their hands to themselves, but cuddling together under the same blanket on the couch was a recipe for disaster. Still, Nate is adjusting, and hasn’t been brooding about his career so much since they got together for obvious reasons.
- He was looking forward to seeing how the new short story would do, though, but he’s still waiting on- his phone gets a notification and speak of the devil, the artist he hired to do the cover just got back to him with the final pic. It displayed two fantasy maids with distinct gyaru features, one tan and one white, and they were laying on top of a sexy bed. Nate is happy with this and thanks the artist, who is one of many he keeps on short notice. He doesn’t have a dedicated cover artist but it’d be nice to have that sometime, same with someone who he could get to actually design the characters so he could get additional art of them but that would be a nightmare logistically.
- Either way, Nate heads downstairs and shows Nicki the cover as soon as she’s there. She really likes it and plops down beside him. Maybe take what I just wrote and have Nate explain it via dialogue. She asks him if he’s gonna go and post it now and do whatever finishing touches he needs to do, but Nate said he wanted a break and that he means it. It’s annoying to go and promote it to all the places it needs to be posted at, so he needs time before all that. He’ll take care of it when she goes to work later. She says she’ll come over tomorrow then and give him a little space.p
- Nicki asks if he’s nervous. A little, but he feels more confident about his new work this time because of Nicki. She’s happy, but while being affectionate with him, she points out that she’s just the editor and that he really did his best on this one. He just needed a push and it went a long way.
- Nate teases that she wasn’t satisfied with just sucking him off but now she’s brown nosing him. She counters back, I’ve read the shit you write, perv. Something tells me you’d barely mind if I did give you a good brown nosing. He comically shuts up.
- Things get kind of quiet for a moment, and Nate realizes they haven’t really just slowed down like this since they hooked up. He asks if something is on her mind and she replies just stupid shit like wishing I hit you up so much sooner. These last few days have been really awesome and all that and it’s kicking her ass knowing they could’ve gotten together way sooner.
- Nate argues she shouldn’t feel bad about that. I had a thing for you in high school and I could’ve tried harder even though you couldn’t date. Nicki admits she probably would’ve caved if he did, which stings a little bit. But she reminds him about Shizuka and it’s not like he would’ve done that anyway because of her.
- Nate is annoyed to think about the girl he asked out in his senior year. He still hasn’t really gotten over it, Nicki guesses. Nate says he has, he’s happy with Nicki, but the way it all went down was a bitter memory that he’s not about to forget. Even if he’s not hung up on Shizuka-
- Nicki is gentle when she points out that he’s written like 10 different short stories about cute, shy, black-haired librarian girls. He says it was in the past and looks away, needed to get it out of his system in a healthy way. Nicki argues that writing wish fulfillment inspired by old crushes isn’t exactly healthy, and a lot of people would call it creepy, honestly.
- Nate doesn’t defend himself and is unashamed, which Nicki figured as much. Things are quiet for a second and she asks Nate if he ever tried to contact her after graduation. You guys were good friends-
- Until I confessed to her and she avoided me for the rest of senior year, Nate reminds. She didn’t have a phone back then either, and even if he had her number or her social media, he thinks that Shizuka made herself very clear and that no follow up was necessary. Nicki teases but he’d still totally fuck her if he had a chance, right? He refuses to answer, asking isn’t this the part where you try and say something dirty like I’ll help you forget about her.
- Nicki points out that his experiences are valuable and she wouldn’t do anything to wipe away his important ones, even if they’re painful. As a writer you gotta keep those things in mind.
- Nate asks why she’s so interested about any of this, and Nicki says she’s just getting to know more about what’s in here and points to his heart. His books all serve as a good gateway into his head, but she still has so much to learn about him and it’s exciting to talk about the old days like this, even if the old days had their painful moments. He’s nostalgic and thanks her.
- He asks what she wants to do now that they’ve got a couple hours to kill before her shift starts. She asks if heart to heart isn’t good enough for him and if they have to be doing something, and Nate is just trying to make the most of their time. Nicki looks over at the entertainment console and asks if he has something they could play together, she specifically asks about Smash. Insert sex joke.
- Nate is cool with that, but he’s more of a competitive player when it comes to how he likes playing. Nicki is more casual but is down to try the competitive ruleset, so they start playing Ultimate. She jokes about how small the stagelist is and he laughs and says to remind him to show her some videos on why some stages are banned. There are some really funny ones. Nicki thinks that sounds interesting.
- Nate uses a character he’s really bad with as a handicap and Nicki is actually pretty good, choosing Daisy as her fighter. Nate keeps barely winning but after a few rounds Nicki is starting to see the appeal of no items etc. Nate explains that this is really nice for him, it reminds him of an old friend of his. She asks if he means one of the guys from high school he used to hang out with, but Nate clarifies he’s talking about a friend he grew up with.
- Nicki asks knowingly what her name is and he says it wasn’t a girl. Nicki has a surprising reaction to this like she knows something he doesn’t. He finds it weird she’s questioning his memory and Nicki covers it up well enough before getting him to elaborate more about his friend Kel.
- There was a homeschooled kid he grew up around in the neighborhood and they hung out a lot, and Kel was super into fighting games and competitive junk even back then. Nicki asks what happened to them, Kel moved away and he never really heard from them again. Kinda sucks, they were really close.
- Nicki says too bad this childhood friend of yours wasn’t a girl, huh? Nate thinks that’s a weird thing to bring up but Nicki brushes it off, saying it’s a trope he’s pretty fond of in his writing. Nate reiterates that he’s a harem fetishist and no matter what type of girl they’re talking about, he’s into them. Childhood friends, milfs, etc.
- Nicki teases him, saying that makes their strike zone pretty wide to get him some new experience. Nate says they haven’t even been dating for a week yet and she’s still gung ho about this, huh? Nicki sarcastically says yeah it’s almost like I actually want this to happen and it’s not just for you?
- Nate asks if this means she’s trying to fuck her female friends. Nicki is embarrassed, they’re cute, yeah… and I think you’d think so. Maybe if you showed me a picture? Nicki says she’s working on it. Honestly, she thinks one of them is close to cracking and she might have something to report soon.
- Nate is hit by this and is like wait, you’re serious? He’d basically written it off from happening since nothing has come of it and he didn’t think she was actually trying to talk her friends into this. Now that the possibility is very real, he becomes nervous and very excited.
- Nicki notices the excitement and strokes him through his pants, asking if he likes that idea. He asks how serious she is. Very. Her friend really likes what she’s seen so far and has been getting off on all of our pictures. She’s already told me she wants to do things with you, but is still working up the courage to commit.
- Nate is even more excited as Nicki teases him further. Do you like that idea? Do you wanna feel what it’s like to have another pussy wrapped around that cock? Nate is easily led along by the dirty talk. Nicki even stresses that this girl is a virgin, too. Teases him about wanting to fuck virgin pussy.
- Nicki has a fun idea and asks Nate if he wants to convince them even faster. Still swept up, he says yes and Nicki talks him into filming a quick sex tape as a little preview for what it’ll be like. A demo. He likes how she thinks and she sets things up at an angle so only their lover halves are visible on the coffee table and takes off her shorts.
- She quickly undoes Nate’s pants and introduces his dick, before having him greet Nicki’s friends awkwardly. She soon shows off her wet pussy to the camera saying she’s really horny and that they’re gonna make this a quickie, but that this is what they have to look forward to if the end up wanting a taste of Nate.
- Nicki gets on his lap and straddles him on the couch. She whispers into his ears that he should grab her ass and set the pace. Show them what it’d be like to be your fuck toy. Nate gets a little too into it now and he demonstrates. Apologizes for Nicki roping them into it but gives an honest pitch saying if you’re on the fence, why don’t you see how Nicki likes it?
- They line up his cock and Nate slides her down on him. Nicki states how big he is and how much he stretches her, says Nate might get a little wild here soon because she teased him a little too hard earlier and he needs to fuck the frustration out. Nicki winks, implying he shouldn’t hold back.
- Nate gets started and he fucks her pretty hard at a nice pace. Nicki’s lollipop exits the mix and they start kissing, making him go harder. She says he really likes getting kissed when he’s getting fucked. Nate spanks her and says she likes it way more. This riles him up and he’s fucking her really hard now.
- Nicki taunts him into showing their audience what it’s like when he floods her pussy and he soon unleashes his load, the back flow getting caught perfectly on camera. They relax together for a moment in the aftermath until Nicki sits up and drools cum all over his cock, explaining that this can be hers too and all she has to do is let Nicki know.
- She gets her phone and turns it off, before sending the video. Nate can’t believe she really just sent that to her friend, but Nicki points out he’s really turned on about it, too. He is, but sadly they don’t really have time to act on it. She needs to stop by home to get ready for her shift and Nate has to get to work, too.
- They kiss and Nicki says she’ll come over tomorrow at noon, but Nicki makes Nate promise he’ll take a walk later and get out of the house. He promises, and she leaves.
- There’ll be a page break here where we see a discord chat between Nicki and Shizuka after Shizuka has seen the video. We get a feeling for her eccentricities here through her text, she types stilted and works in awkward references to things but the conversation is before Nicki goes to work. Shizuka has her doubts about all this. She says it’s not as easy as Nicki thinks. Nate probably still hates her and she can’t just volunteer herself for this.
- Nicki is insistent that it’ll work if she just trusts her. Shizuka wants to think about it for a while longer. Reiterates that Nate likely hates her and Nicki says uphill battles are hard but not unwinnable. Has to go to work, but keep enjoying the vid if you want.
Stuff Happens
- After Nicki leaves, Nate gets into the groove. He’s got the cover art and already completed the ebook in advance so all he has to do is write the copy and submit it to LewdPages. If he was writing a bigger book he would’ve done preorder but since it’s a small story he is content to just get it live. Unlike Amazon, he doesn’t have to wait a review period for his book to go live. It’s up.
- And now the annoying part. He has to go self promote on the different haremlit Reddits and the Facebook groups he’s in, which is just a tedious affair of copy pasting the same thing multiple times, like throwing a bunch of messages out to sea in the hopes that someone finds one. When he’s done with his work, Nate is anxious about what comes next. He’s always nervous when releasing a new book, and he won’t really get any valuable feedback for a day or two.
- Part of him is worried about the negative feedback he always gets, but he fights against the anxiety by hyping himself up that this one is gonna be different. He had help for this one, and he didn’t do it alone. He’s confident that Nicki’s love and support will have gone a long way to improve the quality of his writing, plus the experiences.
- He thinks about his uncle and says something along the lines of just watch me. If he can, that is. Nate isn’t really sure what he believes in spiritually but it’s nice to think that he’s maybe looking down on him. Though given what he’s been getting up to with Nicki, he hopes he’s not being watched… though he guesses it’s too late for that.
- After getting a snack, Nate forces himself out the door for a walk around the neighboring blocks. Nicki’s been making him do this whenever she’s at work, and it’s been good for his mental health to get out of the house more. He feels nostalgic for a time when he used to do this more often, which was back in high school.
- He and his parents were always fighting about stupid shit and would leave when no one was looking and listen to music on his phone and think about stupid things. Sometimes he would daydream his story ideas as if they were animated to the music, but a lot of the time, he used to think about girls during his walks. God, he was a mess in high school. Desperate for someone to love him, yet single-mindedly chasing the one person he shouldn’t have.
- He thinks back to his conversation with Nicki about Shizuka. She’s right. Even now that he’s dating Nicki, he’s still a little hung up on that weird girl in the school library he used to sit next to and talk about manga for hours on end. Still, even with what happened, he doesn’t really hate her. She has her circumstances for being the way that she is, and even now, he worries about her. She’s not good at taking care of herself and he always had to do it for her.
- Nate stops in his tracks as a strange urge comes over him. He takes out his phone and opens up Facebook, typing Shizuka Hasegawa in the search bar. Nothing comes up. Yeah, that checks out. That girl could barely dress herself in the morning, there’s no way she would be on social media. And even then, he shouldn’t be looking her up anyway. Just because Nicki is cool with him sleeping with other chicks, it doesn’t give him the right to sadly look up old crushes.
- He hopes deep inside that she’s doing okay these days before closing the app and continuing his walk.
- Nate has a light dinner when he’s home and it’s a rare occasion where some of the boys were free for some monster hunting so he has a good rest of the night hanging out with his friends online and chatting. They notice Nate seems to be in a real good mood, and he is aloof. The topic of him dating Nicole Parker doesn’t come up because there’s no easy way to broach that, and the only proof he has are a bunch of pictures that he would never show to any other guy.
- He has a good time with his friends that night and he later goes to bed happy without even fapping. There was a time when that would’ve been unthinkable, but he was good for once.
- He awakens the next morning to feel something pressing up against his mouth. Nicki is gently stirring him to awareness, saying it’s already past noon. He’s given her a spare key, allowing her to come and go as she pleases. She says she brought Starbucks and that makes him realize she’s pressing a cheese danish against his mouth so he takes a bite.
- She hands him his coffee and says she put a little bit of extra sugar in it just like he likes, and he’s thankful. There was also an Amazon package she brought in that’s downstairs now which he’s excited about but won’t say why. Nicki asks if he is awake enough or if she should go chill downstairs. Nate says he’ll be down in a second and he finishes his coffee alone while scrolling through his messages and that sort of thing. He gets dressed and heads downstairs to see her reading some manga from the reading room, but she puts it down when he’s there. Some light banter about the series.
- Nate asks how work went yesterday. Same as always. Take pizza, get tip. But it’s okay because she likes that. She asks about his work and if he got worn out from doing all the promo junk. It was annoying, yeah, but he took the walk like he was supposed to and then he got to play with his friends. She’s happy for him, asks what they played, and Nicki expresses interest in Monster Hunter. Nate tells her to stop being so perfect or he’ll be acting unwise. They make plans on getting her a copy of Rise.
- She teases if he’s gonna buy it for her with all his fat royalties. He’s not so confident about that, but Nicki insists that gyaru girls and sugar daddies go hand in hand so he has to spoil her. He can’t really deny that and says he’ll buy it for her, but she gets embarrassed and says she can afford it and was just joking. Too late. Nicki gets frazzled but accepts it.
- Nicki asks if he’s checked on his story yet and Nate has pushed it off until now. Usually he compulsively checks after release and is constantly refreshing pages, but he tried not to do that this time around. Nicki is proud of that, it’s not good for him to let it eat at his mind. He checks with her now and it’s made about $15 so far, which is fairly normal for a new release of his. He’s not exactly popular and the topic was a little niche, so it’s about what he expected.
- Nicki tells him not to feel down about it, it’s still too early. Nate knows. Once the first reviews start coming in, that’s when things will get more serious. Reviews have a lot to do with how LewdPages recommends your titles to casual browsers, which is especially valuable and leads to better recurring revenue since more people will continually discover your titles. Makes sense.
- She wants to know more about his process. Asks if he’s going to jump on the chance to start up the next one and work on the outline he was doing. He isn’t really the type to rest on his laurels, and he’s always thinking about what comes next. He does want to continue the one they were working on, but without the edging. He has more than enough experience with that for now but teases maybe some other time.
- Nicki is jokingly disappointed. She updates him on her friend, explaining they really liked the video they sent and that she’s really close to agreeing. Nate is like fuck is this really happening? Not yet, but it might. How surreal.
- In the meantime, Nicki thinks Nate could use a distraction from all the worrying about the story and she proposes they do something to take his mind off of it and get him some more experience. Nate is eager to hear what kind of devilish idea she’s thinking of. Nicki takes her bag and goes to the other room, saying she needs to get changed.
- Nate is overly excited about what she might have in mind and he doesn’t have to wait long. She comes back in dressed in super slutty maid lingerie carrying a feather duster and he is speechless. She’s like geez I know you love maids but I didn’t think it would be this bad. It is, and he’s super aroused. She tells him to keep it in his pants for now and that it’s not time for anything naughty yet. He’s writing about a bratty maid, so she thinks he should have some experience for the non sex part, too.
- That sounds fun but Nate asks why she has this costume. Like with the gyaru thing Nicki insists it’s not just because of him, she likes buying things that make her look sexy and now she has someone to show it off to so all the better. Nate likes her pouty denial and finds it cute. She says that for today, she’ll listen to anything he says and that he’s her master.
- Nate says you really missed a chance to wake me up like this and start the role play with Starbucks. Nicki pauses and is like fuck you’re right, I should’ve done that… but then you would’ve gotten distracted and we wouldn’t have talked about work and stuff. That’s true. Well, whatever. Are you ready to start playing? Nate is, and Nicki goes back to the other room to re-enter, now in character.
- She is pleasant and gentle, not as brash, and is soft spoken. She’s not a master actress, but she doesn’t have to be to appeal to his tastes. The act is perfect and he’s into it. She addresses him as master and awaits his command. Nate has trouble thinking of anything that isn’t sexual at first, but Nicki helps by suggesting he shouldn’t be afraid of ordering her around. She’ll do whatever he asks.
- He takes this to mean she’ll do maid things like cooking and cleaning and has her start by the shelves with her duster. Nicki accepts and turns her back to him, allowing him to see her backside as she works through the first shelf. She is sticking it out on purpose, but the amazing part is when she squats down to dust the lower shelves. Her ass looks amazing, and Nicki plays it up and asks about her master staring.
- He’s into the roleplay, teasing her for trying to seduce her master. She tries to deny this and he goes wild for it, the gentle way she’s acting. He tells her to get back to work and she does but soon knocks something off of the shelf, apologizing profusely for her clumsiness. Nate is hard on her and says he won’t forget her mistake, more apologies.
- Nicki keeps cleaning and knocking occasional things down, making him understand this is intentional and part of the role play. She only knocks things like plushies and dvd boxes down, none of the expensive figures. Every time she does, she gets more and more apologetic, falling deeper into the act. He calls her out on wanting to be punished, which she has trouble denying outright.
- She asks if there’s anything she can do to make it up to master, which gets him thinking. He has an idea but wonders if it’s a bit much even for their role playing, but decides to give it a shot. Since she’s no good at cleaning, Nate demands she tend to his body as he takes off his shirt. Nicki acts bashful, saying so soon? He calls her a naughty maid for having a dirty mind and that wasn’t what he meant.
- He orders her to get behind him and rub his right shoulder and his neck. He’s been using his dictation software a little less lately and all the typing has been causing some ache. Nicki counters that it hurts because master pleasures himself too much and that he should trust such vital duties to his maid. He says he didn’t even masturbate late night, and Nicki is proud of him. He detects sarcasm, and her maid persona acts a bit more playful.
- Nicki gets behind him and rubs away, all while talking up his ego and praising him for working so hard. Nate is obviously very into this but Nicki starts going too far, applying too much pressure on purpose every now and then. It’s part of the act. She apologizes each time but keeps doing it, causing him to berate her. He wonders if she’s doing this to actually make him mad since it would make his punishment more realistic.
- Eventually she hits a really sensitive spot and it makes him no longer take it. It feels good after the pain though so she at least knows what she’s doing, but still. Nate snaps at her for being a worthless maid who can’t even service her master properly, and he turns around to see her smirking. She tries to hide it and get back in character but it confirms she is being cheeky.
- Nicki fearfully asks what she can do to make it up to master, and he tells her to go upstairs and wait on the bed for her punishment. He gives her specific commands. Ass up, legs together, face down. If he comes up there and she’s not ready for punishment, she’ll get in even worse trouble.
- She complies, but Nate takes her lollipop before she can go and says she won’t be needing this. Nicki is uncomfortable now, asking how long it’s gonna take him to prepare. She’s worried about going without something in her mouth, which is too bad for her. Nate teases her that it’s too bad she was a naughty maid, then, because she doesn’t deserve any kisses. Go on, now.
- Nicki goes upstairs, believing she got more than she bargained for. Nate gets up and grabs himself, marveling at how damn hard this makes him. It’s about to get even better, though. He goes to check the Amazon package Nicki mentioned. Reader doesn’t see what’s inside, but Nate splurged a little and ordered what was likely to be the start of a growing collection of toys.
- He unpacks two and after staring at another he wonders if it’s too soon for the third. Nate hasn’t asked if she’s ever messed around in that way but figures he can ask if a chance comes up that doesn’t kill the mood. He heads upstairs with the box, smiling in excitement. This was about to cross off a whole heap of things from his sex note.
Maid Sex
- Nate has kept Nicki waiting for around ten minutes now, and she’s been on his bed in the position ever since. She was hoping for an outcome like this, but the anticipation of waiting for him combined with the uncomfortableness of her mouth has got her really antsy. She hated this stupid condition of hers. The lollipop thing made it bearable and made her look hot, but it was also really embarrassing to start drooling like a dog, panting and lolling her tongue like an ahegao’d slut. Ok, maybe that part was hot, but if it went on for too long her mouth would start to get really itchy and that was the worst.
- Nate comes in and announces himself, Nicki greets him appropriately and he has a look at her ass. He praises her for taking the position and sets down the box on the bed. She asks what he has, but he is vague about it. She figures he went and got some toys, which she should’ve expected him to do, that perv. She’s even more excited at the idea.
- Noticing her excitement, Nate runs his fingers down her panties and comments on how thrilled she is for her punishment. Still acting in character, she denies this, but Nate tells her not to lie. He feeds her a line about being a slutty maid who wants to be punished and she repeats it, feeling it good to be submissive in this context. Nate calls her a good girl and tells her to apologize for making him do this, which she does.
- Nate runs his hand across her butt, groping and squeezing it. He praises her for it, gets thanked, and Nate lingers on it for a moment. He decides to go for it and asks her if she’s ever done anything to her ass before while he runs his fingers along the whole from outside her panties. She’s shocked at this sudden development but admits to him that yes she has messed around there with some small toys before. She says that if master wants they can work up to it but he’s too big for her today. No worries, he wasn’t thinking of going that far. Just checking boundaries.
- Because he loves his maid he was thinking of going easy on her for today. First a punishment and then a chance to redeem herself. Sound good? Yes. Nate then proposes that naughty maids need to be spanked for their mistakes and asks Nicki how many she thinks she deserves. Nicki says that’s up to her master, and he praises her for the good answer. He proposes they start with ten on each cheek and go from there.
- Nate then spanks her as he says, with erotic tension building from each one. He does ten on one and gets halfway through the other before teasing her and ‘missing’ by hitting the cheek he’d already done. Nicki is shocked by this and yelps from the fresh stinging on her already raw flesh, only for it to worsen as he does it a second time. He teases her about it and she begs him not to miss again, which he teases her for telling him what to do. She apologizes but he intends to take it out on her and resets the counter back to zero.
- Nicki is shocked, internally really into how fucking dominant Nate can be. She’s a switch but he’s really bringing out the sub in her. She knew he had a streak for it in his writing, but to be fair, he also wrote about femdom sometimes too so he seemed to be in the middle as far as tastes go, but that didn’t mean he didn’t excel at what he applied himself in.
- Nate gives her another ten spankings on her red ass before moving to the other and asking if she’s ready for the last round. She’s struggling from arousal but yes she is. Nate doesn’t want to push her too far and he’s already had his fun so he gets through the ten without incident. On the last one she cums and Nate is astonished, teasing her for it. She breaks character and tells him to shut up, but he forgives her by asking if she said anything. Nicki’s ass is raw now and he’s insanely turned on by what he’s done.
- He gets her to thank him for being so merciful in his punishment before moving on the topic to be about her chance to make it up to him. She gets ahead of herself, offering to serve his cock and suck him off real good, but he knows she just wants something in her mouth. No. You’ll be servicing me, but it’ll be with your tits. Nicki is into the idea since they haven’t done it yet but is obviously still antsy.
- Nate isn’t done, though. To prove herself as a maid, she should show that nothing distracts her from service. Nate strips off her panties and comments on how wet she is before ruffling through the box and and taking a small egg vibrator and pushing it inside of her. Nicki is surprised by the sensation, especially when he turns it on. She’s never had this kind and it’s new for her.
- He wonders if it’s enough of a distraction, though… he says as his fingertip pokes her asshole. Nicki gets meek but excited and asks how big the potential distraction is, keeping in character. Nate shows her a jeweled heart butt plug and Nicki says she should’ve known. He loved stories where all the harem girls had their own personal plug and woree it at all times for their lover, and she was surprised he’d propose it so fast. He counters that Nicki was already trying to push him into fucking other chicks before they even kissed and she counters fair.
- Back in character, the maid thinks it has a pretty good chance of fitting as long as there’s-
- Lube? He pours some on her ass suddenly, it’s cold and she reacts thusly. Calls him an ass before he turns the vibe up to max for a split second, making her apologize. Nate praises her and then tests the waters with her ass a bit with his finger. Obviously it’s very tight but he’s fairly sure she was right about it. She must’ve played with it more than a few times to get it this pliable.
- He gives her a little spiel about the plug present and how it means she’s his, while being sure about his wording to imply she can tell him if it’s too much. Nicki gulps down a bunch of saliva and tells master to do it. He slowly starts pushing it inside and we get description of the resistance and the feel of it. It stretches her, it’s bigger than anything she’d tried back there before but it fits and when it’s done she actually quite likes the sensation.
- She gets more praise and Nate asks if she’s up to servicing him now. Yes, of course. He stands at the edge of the bed and Nicki sits there, plug makes sitting feel weird but he tells he she’s going to have to get used to it. she asks if he wants to use some of the lube. He doesn’t see the need, dragging his finger across her saliva covered chin. Nicki gets the implication and drools all over her breasts, which with how much saliva she makes gets them really covered fast.
- Nate gives her permission to start servicing him but he turns up the vibration, making it hard for her to focus. He tells her she can’t cum, either. Another breaking character moment where she reacts angrily but he flicks it up to max again to teach her a lesson. It makes her obedient, even if Nate knows in the back of his mind that she’s going to get even with him after all this.
- That’s a problem for future him, as currently, he is enjoying the first ever titfuck of his life and it’s better than he dreamed. Nicki is skilled at moving them up and down for him, and the lusty look on her face makes him enjoy it even more. She talks to him, one of the best parts about titfucks, asking master how he likes it and stuff. Laying it on real thick. Eventually she tries to steer things into letting her suck on his tip, but she’s clearly desperate for something to suck on so he puts her down and denies this.
- Nicki is disgruntled but Nate promises if she is a good maid then she can lick up all of his cum and if she does a really good job then he’ll let her clean him up and suck him back to hardness. Nicki is extra motivated, slathers more drool down to get to work.
- It isn’t long until he bursts, not once she sets her mind to it. His climax is huge and covers her chest and face, and seeing him get off really turns Nicki on and she has to fight back the urge to climax herself. When he’s done, Nicki asks politely if she can drink everything and she gets permission. Nate watches her scooping up the cum on her face and drinking it like a slut.
- Her mouth is so irritated but just having something in it is a gigantic relief for her. His cum tastes so good like this and she’s desperate for the rest, going as far as to crook her neck down and start licking it from her breasts. Nate can’t believe how slutty it all looks and Nicki is self conscious about it, giving him an out of character look that says not to judge her for it. Instead he praises her and offers his cock as a reward.
- Watching her eat his cum was already enough to turn him on, but a promise was a promise. She cleans him up and sucks him for a while and then some, Nicki being even more relieved than just even eating his cum. The past few days had taught him Nicki was right about being born to suck him off, as she took any chance to do so. Most of the sex they had during their binge sessions started off cause she would casually blow him. It was like his dick had gravity that pulled her mouth to it.
- Nate doesn’t want to have his second shot here, though, and pulls out despite Nicki’s best efforts to keep him in her mouth. She begs him for more, but he commands her to lay down. A good maid should be ready to give master her body as soon as he wants it, and he wants her now. Nicki is into that and can fight off her oral desires to facilitate. She gets into doggy position, allowing him to see her red cheeks and her plug.
- Nate is struck with a sadistic idea when he moves to take the vibrator out. Nicki asks what he’s waiting for, but he surprises her by thrusting inside of her with it still in there. It’s pushed back all the way now and while he can’t bottom out like this, the trade off is worth it.
- Nicki can’t believe he’d do this but really, really likes it. The pressure his cock applies each time he thrusts is insane and she starts cumming really hard shortly after he starts. Nate turns the dial up closer to max and the sensation it gives his tip is unreal. Bit by bit he brings it closer until it’s there and Nicki is stuck continually cumming.
- Nate is having a ton of fun with this but it’s also making him dangerously close and rather than fighting it he gives in and bursts, cumming inside of her with his tip poking the vibe. Nate pulls out and slowly turns the vibe off before asking her to thank him for the using her body like a good maid. She does, but it’s labored. Nate fishes out the vibe covered in cum and walks around the bed to Nicki’s mouth, getting her clean it up and then clean his cock.
- She’s pretty worn out which is rare. Nate says it’s a good look on her, but she’s getting feisty with him now. That next book better be worth the trouble. He teases her if she didn’t have fun being his maid. Nicki says she did but that he’s getting full of himself. He says she likes him like this but she is like shut up. Nate asks if she needs help with the plug but she says she doesn’t have a problem wearing it casually, if that’s what he really wants.
- He’s obviously excited about this and is like really, she says she would agree to just about anything for a lollipop right now and he thinks he’s getting out of this deal much better than she is. She grumbles something about getting him back for this. Nate is like what are you gonna do? She says it’s her turn to order a bunch of sex toys behind his back to use on him, and he’s like as long as it’s not pegging or sounding related she’s free to do her worst.
- Nicki says he’ll regret saying that, but he points to his body of work and says that’s unlikely. He’s perverted enough to enjoy just about anything. Nicki is annoyed knowing he’s right, but whatever. Wanna take this down to the living room and watch something? He does.
Going Out
- Nate and Nicki spend the rest of the day doing their thing, but after a while, Nate leaves Nicki to read and he gets to work on putting the new experiences to use and finishes the outline in a breeze before starting the actual story. He’s always fired up and inspired after sex and is happy to know it wasn’t a one time thing. Nate progresses through a big chunk of the story before calling it in for the night and stopping.
- He then has a casual evening with Nicki where nothing really happens other than watching some anime and cuddling on the couch. That is the routine they've settled into and neither of them feels like doing anything else. The shadow of Nate's newest short story is still looming overhead and even though he's having a good time he can't stop thinking about what the reception will be like. He's doing better than he usually does, resisting the urge to constantly check. It's mostly thanks to Nicki, who stops him from doing so every time he thinks about it. They agree on checking tomorrow in the afternoon and they have a few drinks together that night before crashing on the couch.
- Nate wakes up next morning to a blowjob. He's happy with this, and it's a slower one compared to the way Nicki usually does it. She explains she was feeling antsy and decided to just go for it figuring he wouldn't mind. She figured correctly and she slowly finishes him over the next few minutes. He jokes about being the luckiest guy in the world and Nicki teases him back. Nate checks his phone and it's around 10 AM. He offers to cook some breakfast for them which Nicki is thankful for and they eat together while putting on another episode of whatever they were watching last night.
- Nate checks if Nicki works tonight, having forgotten. Yes she does but they still have plenty of time to hang out before that. She suggests they get out of the house again and Nate is cool with that, agreeing to take her to a local videogame store so they can pick her up a copy of monster hunter like they agreed on. They shower together like usual, get dressed, and much to Nicki's dismay they take Nate's car. It makes a bunch of scary noises as they drive and she says he has to do something about it sometime and he agrees with a sigh. Despite not getting out much, at least his driving skills haven't gotten rusty.
- On their way Nicki asks if he's still nervous about the short story. He suddenly remembers and realizes he hadn't even thought about it that morning which Nicki is happy to have helped with that. She praises herself for being such a good influence and says they can check the early results after they come home. Nicki says shit, slip of the tongue. She didn't mean to call his place home. Nate counters that she's only stayed at her brother's place like once ever since they started dating and that it's a little late for that. To be fair, she did warn him this would happen. Nate isn't complaining.
- Speaking of her brothers place, she wants to stop by there after the game store so she can pick up her switch. Nate is cool with that but then he gets somewhat nervous when wondering if he should maybe come inside and meet her brother/in law. He realizes Nicki hasn't really told him what all she told them, do they know about me, do they know I am a filth monger on the Internet. She doesn't think her brother will be home but he can wait in the car if he's not comfortable meeting them yet if they are. They know I have a boyfriend and that I've been set on you for a really long time but it's really not a big deal.
- Nate is relieved to hear that. This makes him wonder what all she confided to them, though, which Nicki blushes about and get on his case. Luckily, they arrive before he can do much teasing. Nicki asks if he's ready to go and make a bunch of pasty nerds super fucking jealous and Nate finds the idea funny, offering his hand for Nicki to hold. She goes a step farther and wraps her arm around his, acting like a super clingy girlfriend as they go inside. There are predictably some nerds there, a few of which Nate recognized from high school but who weren't his friends. Despite her tan, Nicki is more than recognizable and they have a lot of people staring at them.
- It makes Nate uncomfortable but in a way he's also kind of into it. Like having Nicki wrapped around his arm is a status symbol of sorts. It doesn't help that she's being loud and obnoxious on purpose, especially in a flirty way. He responds as best as he can but she's clearly trying to get a rise out of him which is fitting given the game they are here for. When they go to pick it up from the switch selection, there happens to be a small palico plushy. Nicki asks what that is and Nate gives her a quick rundown on what those are. She asks if there are dog companions too and he laughs saying that it's one of the main gimmicks of the game, but even if you aren't a cat person you'll still probably love the palicos.
- Nicki is like cool, trying to seem like she doesn't want the plushy but Nate is very observant and can tell she obviously does so he picks it up for her. She's very thankful but wants to make sure it's okay and all that. Nate jokes that uncle Matt would want him spending his money on spoiling his adorable girlfriend, he's sure. Nicki is suspicious and asks how much exactly he left Nate but Nate isn't dismissive saying if Nicki was a gold digger she would have trouble weaseling it all out of him anytime soon. Nicki is like okay seriously was he a drug Lord or what. Nate isn't sure he wants to know.
- When they go to the register, the pastiest of nerds is waiting for them. Full neck beard type. Nicki greets him friendly, implying that she comes here often and it's very awkward because the guy obviously crushed on her and seeing her with someone is not his idea of a good time. Worse is that Nicki is still being obnoxiously flirty with Nate and going on about how good of a boyfriend he is. They get rung up and Nate mouths sorry to the cashier, who despite his sadness gives him a nod of respect on their way out.
- Nate complains about how difficult Nicki is, but she counters that he totally liked being the center of attention and having all those jealous eyes on him. Yeah it felt a bit good but it was still not cool. Nicki then teases him saying he should’ve been nicer to his maid yesterday. She really doesn’t let anything go, does she? Nope. Nate sighs and they leave after she kisses him and thanks him for real about the game and the plushy.
- After she gives him her address he knows where it is and drives there. Before any conversation develops, she gets a message from her friend and she tells him as much. It seems to absorb her and she focuses, saying she’ll tell him about it later. Nate can’t help wondering if this means that a development is coming about the junk Nicki keeps talking about, and he spends the rest of the drive trying to not think about it.
- They get to Nicki’s brother’s house. There’s a pride flag out front and it’s a cute little place. Smaller than Nate’s but upper middle class. She says she’ll be back in a minute and Nate rolls the window down to get some air. Not even a minute later and someone interrupts his thoughts. What looks like a cute blonde girl leans down over the window and talks to Nate, offering to suck his dick for a fifty.
- The suddenness shocks him, but Nate logics out this situation and deduces this girl to actually be Nicki’s brothers husband. He says he doesn’t think his husband would be very happy with him. The twink is upset that Nicki told him about him. Nate steps out of the car and is assailed by an adorable Pomeranian that he was walking.
- Twink introduces himself as Casey and is like so, you’re the guy. Nate is doing his best but is really taken aback by all this, and he’s like relax you don’t need to be so nervous. He’s just happy someone is taking that ‘troublesome daughter’ of his out of their hands. He was so worried she’d be single forever that he was starting to think they’d need to go back to the old ways and start saving up for a dowry.
- Nate quickly decides he likes Casey and is a lot more at ease. As soon as he lets his guard down though, Casey goes in for the kill and is like still, pretty interesting job you got. Harem porn, huh? Guess there’s a market for everything. Nate is like shit. Having to explain to the family of the girl you’re dating that you write erotica focused on one guy with many girls is awkward and Nate is put on the spot.
- Casey then starts laughing and says he’s adorable, sees what Nicki sees in him. Says don’t worry, we don’t really judge around here and points at the flag. Nate feels like he just had a heart attack, at which point Nicki comes out and is angry at Casey, yelling at the gay little gremlin to get away from her man. Only she gets to mess with him. Nicki then rushes to Nate’s side and teases him, stroking his cheek and asking if the slutty twink traumatized me.
- Nate says he offered to blow him for a fifty and Nicki is pissed. Casey hides behind the dog as a shield saying you wouldn’t hit a man with a dog would you. Nicki takes the Pom and kisses it saying the dog is too good for him. Nate takes the chance to pet the dog too, and things return to calm.
- Casey asks what they’re up to, Nicki says they got a game they’re going to play together and she was just stopping by to pick up her switch and her work clothes for later. She’ll be staying the night at his place so don’t worry about it. Casey is happy for her, saying they’re too cute. Should really stop by sometime though when her brother is home. He’d love to meet Nate.
- Nate takes the initiative and says that sounds good. It was nice to meet him, he offers a handshake but Casey goes in for a hug saying they’re practically family. Nate is cool with it and awkwardly hugs him back, but Nicki warns if Casey grabs his ass she will break his hands in ways that cannot even be fathomed. Casey is like hey I use those to get your brother off, she gags and bids goodbye to him and the dog. Nate says goodbye as well, having found the ordeal taxing but fun.
- Casey wishes him good luck living that polygamist lifestyle. Nate says it’s not like that and Casey hints that’s not what he’d heard. Either way, good luck.
- They drive away and Nate is the first to speak. No wonder Nicki is keen on getting out of the house so much. Nicki is like yeah no shit. She loves him to death but every time he talks Nicki can feel one her hairs going gray. Still, she’s really happy that Casey likes him. He and her brother have done so much for her, and they mean everything to her. Nate thinks that’s really nice since he’s not really close to any of his family, Nicki offers hers. The good ones, at least.
- Sounds tempting but he brings up Casey’s cryptic comments about the polygamy stuff. He asks how much of the sharing stuff was premeditated, but Nicki is evasive still even when Nate asks if he really doesn’t know these friends of Nicki’s or if she’s just saying that.
- They don’t talk about much until they get home, where they make some coffee and sit in the living room to finally go over the early results of Nate’s new release. Before he does Nicki states that she’s not gonna be publicly reviewing his junk anymore for ethical reasons. She’ll still give him five stars for visibility, but as she worked on the product, yeah, yeah. He gets it. He’s anxious as he boots up his LewdPages report, but when it loads, he’s met with a pretty big surprise. He’s made about $30 from it in the day it’s been out. Launch days usually only get him around 10-15. Nicki is like shit, check your reviews!
- He does and this one is sitting on an average of 4.2 with six reviews. He usually only gets two or three in such a short time. He reads a couple of them and the consensus is the same- this is a lot different than his other output and people are complimenting him for it. He checks his posts on the Facebook and Reddit’s and there’s similar sentiments. People are actually talking about it and saying they’re looking forward to whatever he puts out next, hoping it’s the same quality.
- Nate is overwhelmed with emotions and actually cries a little, he’s so happy. Nicki is incredibly supportive and hugs him tight, stroking his back. All this time and he finally made a step forward. People are noticing me. Nicki gives him a quick pep talk about how he always had the talent, he just needed the experience to draw from and a good editor to sharpen his edge a bit.
- She reminds him that this is only the beginning, though. You write harem stories and to really bring out your full potential, we need to do what I keep saying. Gotta bring other girls into the mix. Nate is less apprehensive now after seeing the results but it’s not much use bringing it up if she’s still waiting for her friend’s verdict.
- Nicki then reveals a bombshell. One of her friends already agreed but she’s out of town for a few weeks, and another one just agreed a bit ago. She wants to meet up with you this Friday. Nate is like are you serious? She saved it till now just in case she needed some good news to cheer him up. What does he think?
- Nate summons up the courage to say he’ll do it and Nicki says he’s gonna knock off another item from the sex note on Friday then- sex with a librarian. Nate is shocked at this and suspicious, thinking it can’t be… can it?
- The chapter ends there but there’s a page break showing the conversation Nicki had with Shizuka in the car earlier. She’s determined to make things right, and Nicki is super supportive with her.
Comments
In the latter’s case, I f you order pizza enough times and get the same delivery girl every time, she may imprint on you like a newborn chick and assume you are friends until you just shrug and accept it. Every pizza ordered is another wave hitting a rock until it fully erodes.
PunishedKom
2023-06-25 04:18:08 +0000 UTCThis has already got me excitied for the next several upcoming volumes. I obviously can't wait for the story of how Nicki and Shizuka became friends. I also want to see how bad Shizuka really is and why Nate pretty much had to take care of her. On an even crazy note though is how does Nicki know Nate's childhood friend Kel and how did they become friends. That is the story I really can't wait to see.
AzureXIII
2023-06-25 03:54:28 +0000 UTC