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Invader Syndrome Ch. 32 (Star Wars AU)

(Every character depicted in the story below is a consenting legal adult over the age of 18)

A/N: Aayla makes a move. Vader makes a choice.

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Google Doc Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BmdFIMdaAeLdppRcPIod40rLaNlLca6CBSG-CzhqQhs/edit?tab=t.0

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A/N: If you see any mistakes in posting, let me know ASAP so I can fix em!

Comments

While Vaderkin is far more horny in this story than I would have imagined he'd be, deflecting Aayla's seduction attempt is just peak trolling on his part. Though I still believe that he's simply trying to figure out how to get Padmé in on the fun of dominating the Twi'lek Jedi...man's just too loyal to his blushing bride for his own good 😉

Alun Lewis

Yus, I stole it from your comment :v

Cambrian

Wow, it looks like you actually ran with my suggestion about having Anakin troll and fuck with Aayla by dragging things out and spouting shit about the Jedi code to keep her frustrated. Really didn't see that coming, but effortlessly done, and thank you. Really plays into Vader's character, and for someone like Aayla, who is basically peak male fantasy, she deserves better than being 'done' this early after her introduction. I doubt many other people here will appreciate it, but in the long term it will pay off, as it will make the moment Aayla actually breaks all the more satisfying. Maybe it will actually teach some of the community here to appreciate the concept of delayed gratification for the greater good of the story and the characters. ...More likely though, they'd rather hunt me down for delaying the clapping of them blue cheeks. Sorry, not sorry. Edit: In hindsight and upon looking at the comments again for the previous chapter, it could also have been Chainsword83 since they suggested it first. But since they accidentally said 'green cheeks' instead of blue, I will shamelessly take credit. It's the equivalent of your argument getting invalidated in a YouTube comment section due to a a grammatical error. Fair is fair. (Plus, this chapter specifically has Anakin bring up the Jedi code, so I'll take it).

RichterQ87

Good catch, fixt!

Cambrian

"And I belief I told you" Believe

VaticToxic

Always better to lure prey into a trap rather than hunt it on its home ground when the option presents itself.

Gamesempie

No matter what decision they make it will be difficult. Maul is operating under both insanity and animal instincts. On the balance luring him is best, because an animal is at its most dangerous when cornered.

Hadrian Scipio

Make it easy on maul, he's suffered a lot. Clean death.

Knight Revan

ambush's always favor the hunter, even if it's not enough.

Devon

....Why Cam.

SylverIron


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