The Unyielding Stag Ch. 115 (GoT AU/Invincible)
Added 2025-09-17 21:45:59 +0000 UTC(Every character depicted in the story below is a consenting legal adult over the age of 18)
A/N: I think this might be the first time I’ve ever written a birth in a story before…
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I can't help but wonder if all these babies of Axel will help the Seven just like he does
JRC
2025-09-19 22:04:24 +0000 UTCGreat chap
Potato
2025-09-19 00:48:34 +0000 UTCgood catch, fixt!
Cambrian
2025-09-18 15:16:08 +0000 UTC"and in the end, Axel had chosen to priority Arianne." Prioritize?
RichterQ87
2025-09-18 10:58:02 +0000 UTCSo, Tyrion nor any of the mistresses of whispers are not going to mention Cersei's and Axel's possible daughter? Also, it would be very interesting to see in some epilogue or in the final battle, a last-minute Reinforcement from other Viltrumites or somEthing. Also gotta say, good call on making the Night King an actual challenge. An OP story Protagonist needs compelling storytelling to make it interesting and gotta admit, going to the wall and everything, it was kinda getting boring. I admit I am one to usually love it if a happy ENding is achieved, albeit a boring story so long as no one got hurt but you spicing things up with an actual challenge is interesting. Hope Axel's mother eventually makes an appearance and hopefully it is in the time after Earth changed the Viltrumites. Or maybe you can make a spin-off with Thrag choosing Axel's world as the breeding grounds instead of Earth and acknowledging Axel as King of The Planet whilst Thrag stays as Emperor. Or maybe Axel's mother is in fact also a daughter of Argall leading Axel to becoming Emperor. Lots to think about, either way, I hope Axel eventually meets and reunites with his mother and it would be a very good reunion.
Big MT
2025-09-18 00:40:44 +0000 UTCI think the birthing scene was well done. Great chapter overall
Wafflenator
2025-09-18 00:09:56 +0000 UTC
