Invader Syndrome Ch. 18 (Star Wars AU)
Added 2025-09-10 16:01:17 +0000 UTC(Every character depicted in the story below is a consenting legal adult over the age of 18)
A/N: Padme isn’t ready for his return, but she also wouldn’t want to go another moment without her husband’s arms wrapped around her.
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Google Doc Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SJPHEAN-LURq4rd64u2BxUCfXtY2L5o6OsqtEsprU5I/edit?tab=t.0
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Comments
It would be mad fucked if Ki-Adi-Mundi was the only non-fallen on the council.
Sith2go
2025-09-10 22:47:01 +0000 UTCGood catch, fixt!
Cambrian
2025-09-10 21:13:08 +0000 UTC"With an eagerness that bellies her current circumstances" Bellies is supposed to be belies I think.
Crispined Glover Potato Snacks
2025-09-10 21:10:19 +0000 UTCWhile I certainly don't hate how the poll is leaning, I think Padmé being the one to test the waters at the Jedi Temple would be a neater idea. Yeah, Vader is the actual Force user and can detect far more subtle signs of Dark Side behaviour, but if the focus will be on the Council to see if more Masters than Shaak Ti are Fallen, having someone who the suspects will be less restrained around could pay dividends a little quicker. As for Padmé's gift to Vader...his reaction to the reveal and Padmé commanding Sabé to demonstrate her oral skills felt a bit odd. Were we meant to infer Vader was recalling the events of recent Star Wars comics, where Sabé and other surving handmaidens of Padmé had... interactions... with him? The fact Sabé was in a familiar outfit was pure gold, BTW 😉
Alun Lewis
2025-09-10 19:36:31 +0000 UTCIt would be funny if the entire councile has fallen in some way,or at leastis hip deep in some vices of their own, with only kenobi still on the light side, while everybody gives their best to hide it, eather on their own or in small groupes. Just think about a jody who sells wooke pelt online and makes porn, while windu is secretly a pimp, all while they act so extreme to hide their own falls. All that is missing is someone forgetting to clear their browser history and suddenly everyone learns of the fall of the others, and instead of disbanding the order, they could just say fuck it , and change the rules to make all that they do in secreat be ok if in small doses. We could get anewcasino with force sensitive pole dancers called "The Temple", or we could see a yoda who teache he younglings about how to dose their glitter dust just right, a nice buzz without the ER visit, or how to identify a good dealer instead of one who sell bad drugs...
Rotaugur
2025-09-10 18:57:41 +0000 UTC
