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Second Chances Ch. 1 (KPop Demon Hunters)

(Every character depicted in the story below is a consenting legal adult over the age of 18)

A/N: KPop Demon Hunters has me by the throat. Please give this a try for me, I’m desperate for feedback.

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Google Doc Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kvlSdbrxjOpMktgft29GFxi22gKrgfBF0LY56M9Z6JU/edit?tab=t.0

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A/N: Please give feedback, preferably in the form of a Comment but any other form of a ‘thumbs up’ (Likes, Kudos, etc) would also be appreciated. I will be gauging interest in this fic across all websites to see if I should consider continuing it.

KPDH is the new hotness and I know I love it enough to want to write this story, but I dunno if my audience necessarily wants it.

Comments

Saw this come up and decided to watch the source. I'm in this will be fun.

Stephen Grote

I did not expect to see this. Hard watch!

Kind

Yeah this fic probably won't be super long, maybe 50-ish chapters? But should still be fun!

Cambrian

Not sure if KPDH could carry on its own, I'd read it but there's just the one movie. Not a whole lot of fic to fan for.

Doug Bowman

Honestly completely separate from this fic, you should 100% watch the original! I recommend it with my whole chest!

Cambrian

Sounds interesting but I had no idea what is going on :) I have not watched the original.

ZloGlaZ

I'm here for it, especially if this is meant to be a more plot forward story where Jinu tries to help Huntr//x as a Tuxedo Mask type to their Sailor Scouts

MisterSunshine1029

I may never write it, but my headcanon for a part two of At Least The World Is Safe? would be Mira and Zoey breaking into the demon realm (probably via Derpy's teleporting) to get back to Rumi. And when she refuses to let them rescue her, they join her instead, willingly becoming demons to help her defend the human realm from THIS side of the fence. Misery loves company, after all~

Cambrian

I like it, i don't think you could get 50 chapters out of it with out really dragging rhe pacing but I don't think we'd want 50 chapters, if you make this a passion project and dont burn out I think you could write a really good (less horny than usual) story out of this, your a good writer and if this is gonna be a shorter story you can do this while planning the dxd story in the background

Your Jordan's Are Fake

Honestly I only listened to the songs. But sure this is good too.

oscar enrique sampedro lopez

You know what, even having not yet seen KPDH (don't worry, I'm not someone who minds spoilers), I really like this. It's a great start and even without having seen the movie I can follow it so far. I look forward to seeing what happens next, and also how you add the sexy times to it. :)

Chainsword83

Said it before in the discord but f**** send it. This has a lot of potential here.

SylverIron

Go for it. I’m obsessed with K-Pop Demon Hunters too

TouchtheSky

Let me go watch the movie and come back

Seal

I couldn't get into it. Movie got ruined for me by the people that were obnoxious about it in my personal life, so now I just can't watch it or hear the songs without disliking it. I can read ff about it, so I've read this and while not hugely pumped about it, it does seem interesting.

VaticToxic

while part of me would like to see the tragedy that was At Least The World Is Safe? turned around with a happy ending.... this is just as good. It's got my interest in the same way Maidenless no Longer did. and given the fact I still consider that your best work, that should give you an idea on how i'd love to see this continue.

Kyo Amamoto

I like this chapter more than Silver Eyes and the DxD AU idea.

Y. B. A.

Absolutely. Please continue

Jason Ebersberg

I need 100 chapters stat

Giovanni Nicholas-Fernandez

YES. PLEASE! Gonna be totally honest, the more deviant part of me hopes you take this fic into a full poly relationship with huntrx probably with rumi as the main girl sort of like how Axel has his queens, but the rest of me would absolutely read and love this story just for the plot, no "plot" necessary, if i weren't dealing with busy weeks with need for quiet in my breaks ahead of me, I could probably watch that movie every day. So definitely do write this as much as you want and do whatever cooking come to mind, I trust your mad skills Cam.

William

They arent extensions of Jinu but rather creations he made. He just hasn't ever been able to accept that they developed minds of their own over the years heh.

Cambrian

Interesting. That's all I can say for now, but I'm looking forward to reading more and seeing where you go with this.

Gamesempie

I am curious about the pets being an extension of him. I had always figured they were something else given they were still in the mortal world at the end. The movie certainly left a lot of room for more exploration. But it does work with your interpretation of him being a part of the Rainbow Honmen, so they could stick around. A great start. Would not be mad if this replaced Silver Eyes.

Jack

If this is what speaks to you now do it. If you write about something your interested in your bound to make it good. If not at least passionate.

Corn The Man

Now, having actually read the chapter, I can say that I would love for you to make this into a full fledged story. The fact that he failed to kill Gwi-ma is a good outcome. Any other "second chance" story would have had the MC kill the big bad from the get go. I'm looking forward to more of this.

JO LP

Completely setting aside anything I write, you should 100% go and watch the movie just for itself. Its a masterpiece. and in the tightest 90 min runtime too.

Cambrian

I tried but haven't seen the movie. Names and context flew over my head. If you want to write this fandom, go for it. Do what makes you happy. I'll still be in the dark and will continue to be unless I watch the movie but write what you want. You cater to enough of us and our whims daily

Nat

If you have Netflix, you should 100% go watch KPop Demon Hunters. Doesn't matter if you're not into kpop or animation, I'm not into either of them myself. But the movie is frankly a masterpiece and combined with the music, its beyond phenomenal. Highly recommend seeing it completely irrespective of this fic.

Cambrian

I have no clue what the fuck this is.

Man of Sodium

moar

The Cancer Fox

I hold a lot of interest in your worldbuilding and lore, and think I'd really enjoy the exploration of all the power systems and backstory you'd inject into this system. thanks

m ountain

"KPop Demon Hunters has me by the throat. Please give this a try for me, I’m desperate for feedback." Are you kidding? It's Kpop Demon Hunters, I'm reading it for myself dude.

JO LP

Just Go for it Man!

That black guy

Ok, quite interesting, not sure about the time travel mostly because Rumi need to fall (almost) to grow to accept herself, its a balance of silliness and serious issues. also the last song she compose to make the new hommon was quite good but I can see potential.

Alatoic

It might steal Silver Eyes' weekly slot but without voting >.>;

Cambrian

Is this a new free write

Lunerwolf

As someone else who is all kinds of captured by KPDH I am super down for this and very excited to see where this goes

King Chungus III

Reading 20+ hours of KPDH fanfiction in the three days since I watched the movie tbh. Been percolating shit in my brain hardcore lol. Feel like I've seen a lot of the ideas I have for this story in other fics, but I don't think I've seen any one fic do EVERYTHING I have in mind for this story

Cambrian

I am incredibly curious how you came up with this as the premise for a fic?

zefur

I am…ALL KINDS CURIOUS!

SpankMyBeef

On the one hand, any interest in K-Pop Demon Hunters in general I had has only increased incrementally with this story...but on the other? I am interested in seeing where this story goes from here. I mean...it's clearly a do-over fic. The MC is one with baggage that will need to be jettisoned or used to fix mistakes...which I like well enough as a concept. And it seems like the endgame is Jinu getting to be with Rumi after Gwi-Ma is permanently vanquished...which seems like a nice goal. So yeah...I'd like to see a little more.

Alun Lewis

I'm excited! I love it when you write a little less porn oriented. You're a great author.

zefur

This looks real fun

James Johnston

I am down for this. I am excited to see some team bonding.

matt tombaugh

oh YES

ISupportYourCreativeLiberties

Ok, I'm down to see where this goes

Metri Boomin

Oooh... I like how this could go! There are a lot of possibilities here already, and I'm so down to see what happens next!

Riser4991

I really wanna see how this plays out

Voltron-0Q1

Please write more I’ve literally been waiting for something exactly like this

Max Turry


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