Vibe Check: Silver Eyes
Added 2025-09-02 17:36:42 +0000 UTCSo time to come clean, the Silver Eyes story has honestly been giving me trouble for months now. I'm just kind of spinning my wheels at this point and admittedly don't quite know where to take it.
The whole concept started as "what if the MC found himself in a breeding program to repopulate Silver Eyed Warriors" but ultimately I dunno if that concept really has legs beyond Cole fucking another MILF character every other week.
Trying to avoid Sunk Cost Fallacy here, so I'm polling you guys to find out if its just me or if I'm right that this story is kind of just... eh.
I probably wouldn't end this story immediately to be clear, but depending on the results of this polling, I might look into sunsetting it in the next couple of chapters.
Comments
Honestly, if you wanted to take this slot and update Invader Syndrome twice a week, I'd be stoked. I know it's probably not practical, just saying. XD
Chainsword83
2025-09-05 02:04:20 +0000 UTCthis one honestly never caught my interest cam. soory.
Kyo Amamoto
2025-09-03 09:31:08 +0000 UTCThis story seemed to suffer from trying to make both the plot and the porn the primary story drivers. Your stories work better if one of those is driving but the other is a frequent tag along, so either you needed to stop making every plot point lead to sex instead of other action, or stop trying to make a coherent plot and just accept that the story should be made of sex scenes with everything in between skipped over,.
Aaron Hardin
2025-09-03 05:58:11 +0000 UTCIt really was just kind of a meh story after a while. Basically the same sex scene with *insert milf here* but no real story advancement because impregnating women was the point of the story.
Shadowfox
2025-09-02 23:29:34 +0000 UTCAre you going to change it with another rwby story?
Oppilif
2025-09-02 23:22:29 +0000 UTC
