The Unyielding Stag Ch. 30 (GoT AU/Invincible)
Added 2025-06-24 21:58:37 +0000 UTC(Every character depicted in the story below is a consenting legal adult over the age of 18)
A/N: Tywin Lannister arrives in King’s Landing at long last. He’s not thrilled about it.
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This is the story that got me to come back and renew my Patreon subscription. It's just such a chef's kiss. I would LOVE it if Robert's secret journal talking about his "lover from the heavens" were found, confirming for the faithful through Robert's own words that Axel is blessed by the Seven; in fact that the Seven have blessed the Baratheon Dynasty so much that they sent one of their servants down to Robert to give birth to the one, true king filled with all their might.
Chainsword83
2025-06-26 12:10:24 +0000 UTCIs it odd that this kind of thing didn't used to bother me all that much, but then I watched an episode of The West Wing where Barlet points it out to someone and now it does?
OdinMage
2025-06-25 19:32:57 +0000 UTCI'm loving this story a lot. There is one thing you keep doing, though, that I find annoying even if it's something tons of people do all the time. Every time you are talking about more than one of them you say "Lord Paramount's", but it should be "Lords Paramount", just like "Courts Martial" or "Surgeons General", etc. I know it's a stupid thing to care about, but every time I read it I get booted out of the story for a moment when my brain (mainly OCD) goes "that's wrong!" That aside, as I said I'm loving this story and I can't wait to see where it goes! I like that you aren't having us vote for it as well, though I'm guessing that's what you mean by 'free write'.
OdinMage
2025-06-25 16:45:21 +0000 UTCI felt pity for Tywin until I remember what happened to Elia and welll the pity disappears
Jhrainechr
2025-06-25 07:39:43 +0000 UTCI had actually thought Myrcella was one of the options for Axel to get with, because she should be of age and Tywin would certainly want her to at least try to bear an heir to the throne, if Axel would accept her. I mean, Axel put his foot down to send her to Storm's End, but it seems like keeping her as a ward/threat wasn't even considered.
RHar
2025-06-25 07:33:41 +0000 UTCActually feel a little bad for him, luck lost him his grandchildren and son, then his daughter keeps fucking up so not only did he loose marcylla to Stanis but Cersie even admitted to trying to kill him for years.
ethan maloney
2025-06-25 05:41:32 +0000 UTC
