Rise of the Guild Master Vol 1 Outline
Added 2022-07-19 22:07:53 +0000 UTCA note before we begin. I have something to say
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Fucking awesome. Can't wait. No really. Hurry up an release them already please xD
Marksm4n89
2022-07-20 19:27:35 +0000 UTCWhile it won’t be that drastic, it will be slow lol. Similarly to Sam, Zutiria is going to have a massively expanded early arc and will need a week or more of development before anything sexual happens with her, for example.
PunishedKom
2022-07-20 19:26:15 +0000 UTCI'm totally down to read a dozen books per girl.
Marksm4n89
2022-07-20 19:12:56 +0000 UTCIt’s too early to tell what the pace and introduction of girls will be like yet. I originally planned on there being more stuff before Zutiria shows up, so vol 2 might end with her arrival while I get the other things I wanted to do first. We will see, though.
PunishedKom
2022-07-20 19:09:23 +0000 UTCI swear that comment wasn't there before. Lol its your story and if thats what u wanna do with it I'm cool with it. Are you going to introduce 1 new girl per book at this same pace? I can see that being doable for a few of them
Marksm4n89
2022-07-20 18:10:20 +0000 UTCRead the comment above on why I did gpa’s death the way I did. Glad you like the pace! Gil is new, but it’s also the name I’ve had for him internally for quite some time. It’s just a minor thing, he’s not going to be referred to it very much which is why I had them establish he likes Boss better, but it’s there just to prove he has one since it bothered some readers before.
PunishedKom
2022-07-20 18:02:44 +0000 UTCI agree with the above feedback, GPA death seemed kinda cliche and abrupt. The slower pace also sounds better then before, which I didnt think was possible. So good job with this. Also did we ever have a name for gm before? I dont remember "Gil" from before. Is it short for something?
Marksm4n89
2022-07-20 17:45:37 +0000 UTC
