More Old Chapter Rewrites
Added 2021-04-18 05:35:03 +0000 UTCGot some new revamps done today, this time I split the old 'Do What You Want' chapter into two, and totally rewrote them. Now, Sam inspiring the Master to take the reigns on his life is less him following her advice and now more her planting the idea and leading him to taking it.
I might be doing some larger, sweeping rewrites sometime soon. Namely centered around redoing the Master's initial meeting of Lux Ultima, his depression afterward, Fleetfoot's encounter, as well as trying to exercise the two month time period from ever having been mentioned to make the Duke more threatening. That one will be somewhat intensive, and my confidence is low at the moment so we'll see where it goes.
https://www.scribblehub.com/read/198321-rise-of-the-guild-master/chapter/198375/
https://www.scribblehub.com/read/198321-rise-of-the-guild-master/chapter/273881/
