New Audio MHFAP! Project! Need Feedback!
Added 2018-11-19 09:59:54 +0000 UTCAre any of you familiar with Gone Wild Audio? Well, what if I told you I'm working on a MHFAP! version and that we may have already casted the perfect voice actress for Tali?
Yeah, this is a thing that's happening! But since I'm new to writing this I need you guy's feedback, so please read this script and tell me how you like it!
Comments
It's been a while since I've written anything large so I wanted to take the opportunity to explore Tali more.
PunishedKom
2018-11-19 22:24:55 +0000 UTCWell at least the dialogue is fine! That's obviously the important part. And yeah, this is a relatively simple script. Not a bunch of exciting stuff but should be really, really good when finished due to the cutesy feel of it all.
PunishedKom
2018-11-19 22:24:17 +0000 UTCA few typos: 1) Quiet, not Queit 2) romantically, not romantic The past tense of cast is still 'cast', not 'casted'. Otherwise, this looks good for a quick test of a person's voice.
DM_5
2018-11-19 22:11:35 +0000 UTC
